[Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/MARCH2010095.jpg

[Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/MARCH2010094.jpg

CRITSSsssssssss..?

 

I know my shits mad toy; criticism is greatly appreciated.

 

Addition

just an attempt
appreciate any crits

thanks guys

 

deathmario-loose the lines sticking out of the top of the T?

 

thanks, they're the dots for the i's though, should i still lose them?

 

eonr? not bad the r still looks like a b..and the n seems swung out to far if you get what im sayin ... but it could be me being a fan of more simplified styles too.

for the weekly handy battle

 

its confusing where the ENI touch

 

does that say genesis, think it does.. anyway looks good i'd choose a diff I and maybe S tho...

from last week:

[Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY3RDMARCH2011012.jpg

[Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY3RDMARCH2011008.jpg

[Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY3RDMARCH2011007.jpg

[Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY3RDMARCH2011005.jpg

[Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY3RDMARCH2011004.jpg

[Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY3RDMARCH2011003.jpg

 

@darthmario sorry, above the 1st D, looked like a T but the T between the 2 I's should be more even with the rest of it, but, addition?, my advice is find a new name, to many letters

 

thanks man, i'm studying mathematics in college so i figured it was appropriate. i agree about the too many letters though, i was just doodling it on my notebook and thought, why not. i'll work on something else

 

yea just keep up the work man

 

yeah well no one gave me crits, i give people crits what the fuck

 

maybe there's nothing to crit

 

hmm i guess, im pretty good at tags i cant improve that much more...

 

lol no i didnt mean it that way xD

 

HAHAHAHAHAHA

your handstyle hasn't changed since you first came on here, Dkode. Critting you isn't even worth it, you haven't changed at all whatsoever.

 

why is everyone putting those details in already? i'd say, first practise the letters before u put all those adds on it. u can put a crown on it and think its cool, but ur a toy, so than u r a double toy.

 

I like the D and the K on the last flic Dkode... Other than that what's been said

 

SPLRT,SPLERT thinking or using SPLRT for throwies and tagging SPLERT?