AZRM - I'm not feeling that bottom one. The last two letters are majorly thin compared to the first two, i know you said you ran out of space but you shouldve noticed when you pencilled it out lol. Not feeling that extension in the A either. I do like that middle one though, that whole chinese/japanese whatever thing is cool! Dont know if the whole metal plate type thing i tried here was any good. Still reaching for new ideas and direction really.
random shit i been working on unique - add some color skope2 - dope forcefield would look cool with that worm - first flik is solid
wtf kind of name is Azrm anyway dude... my main crit to you would basically be to change it and find some better letters and something that can actually be PRONOUNCED right unless its not the name youll be using to write and these are only random letter practice... then it's all cool
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dont use more bars than the letter contains, do simple letters. dont bother fooling around with crazy ideas and wildstyles.
hud - there is a guy who gets up around me on the side of buildings, he does panels that look like that but a little more organized and not crossing each other. personnaly i see them and think, cool. but who cares if others don't, thats what he do. and he doit till its done.
skope -looking at this one (with the metal) i think he would be a relatively easy piece to paint on a big enough wall, and the aftermath would defiantly be respectful. that is if it turns out on the wall the way it does on paper. lol i like it though. (IMO)
I honestly am not in anyway qualified to crit you cause my work needs a lot of help too. but if there was one thing in particular it would be as I said in my last post, that crossing the lines without proper knowledge and training turns out looks a little discombobulated so I would say to help keep it looking organized don't cross the bars at all. ... yet
Stigma-your fill and 3-D are pretty dope, i can see where ur trying to go with it. keep up the good work and sketch over and over again till you better develop that style. Any crits? didnt get much last page. View attachment 601841 View attachment 601842
dont bother, compleatily scap that shit . either sketch some dubs and work up from that or take up stamp collecting
Hud - maybe you should ditch the snowflake style? Red Eyes - you should paint those around the city your in Stigma - looks cool, but the only letters I can make out are S and R Crits, I feel as though the T should be closer to the A.
NAH- nice and simple keep it comin UNIQUE- cool shit man. Is the first letter a backwards D? the E is steezin AZRM- name is no good. go way simple and dont worry about colors SKOPE- you should go simple with that one YOUTH- The O is ugly. I like your shit dude but I think you should go simpler for a lil while, like in terms are bar thickness, just to see how it goes HUD- do letters lol idk what that is STIGMA- cant read any of that. Cant read the handies either, at least i think those are handies RESN- crits in intermediate thread this weeks worth of scribbles. WHERE DA CRITS WHERE DA CRITS WHERE DA CRITS AT! [Broken External Image]:http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/3962/scan0009.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/7783/scan0008g.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/984/scan0010fu.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/2514/scan0012h.jpg
FLAT- letters look good not sure on the two extensions on F and T though other than that together simp in chrome would be fresh PEKINS- cool you're practicing other letters and things but the letter size bugs on most of them. Like the first pictures P ready for all of you to shit on this sketch ahah
Will do! should i have the T overlapping the R or the full letter? and what do you think about the letter type?
Stigma- those are fresh, especially the last one, paint that. Pointman - you should just bring the R abit more out, so that you can see the bottom left half of the letter abit Crits