ian -what weedeater said
youth-i like your style the left top side of your y just throws me off idk why.
Aight guys Ive used my chill spot plenty summer is coming around are my throws decent enough to start gettin my shit out there in viewable places or should I stick to my spot for a while longer?

 

crit me

 

^ I like the S cause its unlike everyone else's generic version of S's, but uh the K and N look like crap, and why is ur A hiding?

@ hipe yo your P still dont look right *****, that one in particular looks like a lower case E to me, the bootom of the rounded part should be connected to the part that comes down from it ya digg? Its almost there

 

the A didnt fit cause i had a samall place to throw it and yea had to do it like that
yea im trien to change the K but i ficed the N ill post a painted one later on this week

 

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i like your throw mewn cant really fault it except maybe make the M a bit fatter?

 

niceone mewn, like the style. but i shouldchange your E. maybe make the ends of it the same length like u did to the M and W.

@nah not bad but its kinda sloppy. the H is leaning too much and that add on the N doenst rly fit the rest. maybe put that same add to the A and H. it will create a nice effect.

peace

 

nah move your marker quicker dont have to press hard either...
mewn - looks good only thing I dislike is the loop thing on the top left of your m

 

@H1P30N3R the only thing i dont like are the little wholes on the P and the O
The block one i was just trying things out
the one with the worlds i ust thout it would be a cl thing to draw(maybe a future piece)

 

Post Some Critz!

Just want some critique and help to improve my throw-up.

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@SilentVandal its looking pretty good but your k looks diferent from all the other letters also work on your e

 

for the weekly battle. crits please?

 

thats cuz its an L nigguh

p.s. you're shits all wack and not throwies. get out the sketchbook and start doin keyboard letters, like this: OZON

 

thats an L my man

and ian, the only letter thats not working with the rest is the S, also, the right side of the second D needs some work. props on the HOME battle btw

 

yeah i havent been able to come up with a solid s that fits that style. im gonna use that O and E for my actual throwie and i think my n will fit but im havin trouble with the S, i can do a handie S and a piece S just fine, its actually probably my fav letter to do, but i cant seem to get down the throwie version lol. thanks for the props too

 

@hipe yo thas lookin pretty good you paint it yet?

 

OZON, I'm gonna have to ask you to stop giving crits please, sir... step outta the car please, sir.
from now on, OZON gets free crits, he doesn't have to crit to get crits, ayyyt ?
you're welcome, OZON
you're welcome, everyone else

 

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