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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. snoketg

    snoketg Senior Member

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    never mind i changed it forget the on i just posted can i get some crits on this one
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  2. Norfsuthr

    Norfsuthr Elite Member

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    Not about to bump it but personally I like toga's shit. Big black and ugly tags on virgin white walls is just distasteful vandalism, and the fact that it's far from good graffiti makes it even better. No argument can be made that it is art, it's just damage, which i like. Keep at it toga, but you might want to paint sewers and shit for a while.

    Snoke that e is bad. Make the N and K smaller or the SO bigger. Youre on the right track. About your tags, they suck. Practice.
     
  3. SPone

    SPone Member

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    bump for crits
     
  4. SPone

    SPone Member

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    snoke i would seperate the o from the n a bit but thats just me 001.jpg critss please
     
  5. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

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    DC, this is tag section. But. I would go back to the books. Or just do Throwies/Tags till you get the can control to piece.
     
  6. Simon

    Simon Senior Member

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    I'm unsure of how to do my K's and E's. Any advice?
     
  7. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    Simon: the second one is your best effort. I suggest making the middle part of the B, A, e, and R hit around the same spot and don't bring the leg of the K over your E just yet. It seems to be jackin' up your flow.
     
  8. skinaone

    skinaone Elite Member

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    2) BANER
    ummm play with them a bit more
     
  9. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    i feel like there are a bunch of 10 year olds on here... that looks like it was writen in crayon
     
  10. MyNipsAreHard

    MyNipsAreHard Senior Member

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    Baker- spread the letters out a lil bit. keep it simple until you know what your doing
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    ya?
     
  11. Simon

    Simon Senior Member

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    Thanks I have taken what you said into account and I have attached an image to the bottom of this post.

    :p it says BAKER

    Yeah... the pencil is a blunt 2HB so it's pretty dark
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    also
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    okay final edit, I'm off to bed now.. It's kinda looking more like the 2nd one, I'm finding I can get the letters more equal length much easier now :3
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    Last edited: Oct 27, 2011
  12. Ruhig Der Sankt

    Ruhig Der Sankt Member

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  13. Shell703

    Shell703 Senior Member

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    BAKER - That second one is the shit! Keep pumping out more shit like that, keep it consistent

    BLOEK - I don't think theres a flow to your overall tag, some are soft angles and some are sharp, the B and L especially, the rest of the letters can stay, try making the B and L look more like the OEK

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  14. OZON

    OZON Senior Member

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    Who said I was here for the art ever think that i just wanted to vandalize shit.
     
  15. knowtheledge

    knowtheledge Senior Member

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    oh damn this page looks like ass

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  16. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    I like the hand except for that last e being swung out because all the other letters are tight together the last e just doesnt fit imo
     
  17. knowtheledge

    knowtheledge Senior Member

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    aha yea I have a tendency to do that
     
  18. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    same here just feels like you have to give it something extra at the end but most ppl think otherwise
     
  19. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Your M looks awfully similar to mine... And I'm pretty sure I was writing Mues before you starting writing muke.
     
  20. knowtheledge

    knowtheledge Senior Member

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    beeg whoop want to fight about it