Hapa - I wouldn't really use that. It looks like you crossed yourself out. That's not good. Dohboy - Go simple Drop all that extra shit. Only worry about simple LETTERS right now. That top right is your best attempt. Drop all the extras on it. Write it.
Hapa, good to see you are starting SIMPLE (unlike 70% of the toys..) but i agree with syn, it looks like you crossed your self out mate, H is an easy letter, make the bars just a bit bent or one a bit longer than the other, A is just like an H but closed at the top.. P you get to work on on your own . EDIT: And make sure your bars all go the same direction!! EG: >>>>> or <<<<< but NEVER ><>><><><> if ya get what im saying..
Thanks a ton for the crits guys. But heres what I have now.. Not a ton better I know, Im just having trouble with inspiration for the forming of the letters. I know its not a huge improvement but i think its going towards more of that curvy look I guess
oie_111814321YyM4NZW For the next battle. Crits on the N specifically? I think i lost it's structure a little trying to make the loop to match the A. Hapa I'm gonna do some example for you soonish..
That last dana looks ok ^. Pink setzie tag is aight too. Dana throws are wack, but props on getting up.
here is a tag i did with a marker [Broken External Image]:http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2498.JPG
and here we were all wondering wtf was that a photo of... thank you for that precise explanation really