@tranc looks like you just bit letters from different artist man and you need to work on structure too @bas the page looks sweet i jutst dont think the letters look too hot @ physh......edit........i didnt realize the words were copied come on man get ur shit together
considering putting a bar on the bottom of my P to kill deadspace dont plan on keeping the one over the O tho. sorta like this
Can I get some crits on this? Ive been tryin to come up with more burner like shit than just straight letter
@ Taro, Kaze & Gemer: Yes, it says Tea! (with an exclamation mark). It was actually for an old character battle, so the letters were just the starting point of the page. I know they need work (especially the E is rather weak), that's why I'm practicing. I'm trying to develop this specific style a little more. And I'm not too happy with the clouds either, but again, it's a learning process. I think I'm sticking with a cloud-theme for my next one or two sketches just a toy around with them a little.