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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks dank, i wasnt sure bout the extension on the R but just decided to go for it and see wat happened lol il stay away from those for a little while. i get what ur saying with the S but i dont fully understand what u meen by kinks in the round part of the D and R, do you meen like dont have it with those sharp corner type things inside the R and the bottom right corner inside the D? i always forget to make the middle letters the same size as the 2 last letters haha..bad habit lol. il work on those things u said..thanks dude

    Malto that looks dope, maybe just go on flickr or som other website and look around at some stuff with M's and get some basic ideas on how to change it up abit, i really like that E in the top one, nice drip affect too
    letter spacing can be an issue for me lol, gotta work on that too
     
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  2. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    one corner don't matter. but 4 random looking one one the R or the top weird small kink on the D. you could probably make it work. if your having trouble with heights, draw a base line and a line for the top
     
  3. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    oh i get wat ur saying now, just unneccsary corners and shit. il work on that and keep that in mind, thanks for the advice
     
  4. Halo161

    Halo161 Senior Member

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    Cool, watchu write ?, i write Swine.
     
  5. malto

    malto Senior Member

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  7. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    for that one *****
     

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  8. Theartofverb

    Theartofverb Member

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    I like your style malto, the dips at the corners are cool. I think your "U's" are a bit too cramped in there though
     
  9. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    shit that naked is sick..dig that A and E alot
     
  10. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    i need some help with the drop shadow..mainly on the D...wasnt sure if it should be like this or were the drop shadow goes all the way around the round part of the D and connects to the main vertical bar of it..i think its suppose to go around the round part and connect to the main vertical bar but i wanted to make sure before i fine lined this shit...could use some crits on the letters too even though there already fine lined....just noticed i missed the dropshadow on the E
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  11. malto

    malto Senior Member

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    took your advice and spread the U out a bit more i think it looks better, also happy with my M now :)
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    naked, thats a fresh simp maybe change the middle bar of your E so its the same size instead of like triangle-ish
    and dvise i like that simp too but the lower case D throws it off in my opinion
     
  12. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks malto, i think i made the D too small, i just did a lower case D cuz i cant make capital D's work with the round style with out making it look really retarted, i dont want it to have that big gap in the middle that capital D's got. those fumers look dope as usual, cant really give any usefull crits besides the same stuff about the M
     
  13. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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    nvm ace, im retarded... go about your ways
     
  14. omiz

    omiz Senior Member

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    Not finished
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    attempt at a different style.
    plif is a friend of mine
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  15. Buck

    Buck Senior Member

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    Idea for my dads memorial piece in my shop. to bad I couldn't put it on te wall like this...
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  16. KroeGHK

    KroeGHK Elite Member

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    that fill is way too busy anyway, im not 100% sure but the letters seem to look decent, keep at it, as they are the letters appear to go well together, idk tho
    omiz scrap that top sketch, its just not workin, that bottom one however, has some potential, keep workin at it
    fumer i dig your style but for some reason im not a huge fan of your F's, they arent bad or anything idk maybe its just me
    anywhoo
    not sure if i ever posted this, if i did it didnt get crits
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    some other shit
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    anyone wanna exchange?
     
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  17. Theartofverb

    Theartofverb Member

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    I can see what you're trying to do with the liney fills but it's just coming off as unfinished
     
  18. toopski

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  19. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    lookin' good toops. Only beef I have with it is the bottom of the left leg of the A.
    Gophe: That bottom one is sick. try that with a lower case H based off the O only inverted.
     
  20. Halo161

    Halo161 Senior Member

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    the only supplies i have is a dying pen, so i just played around with it, ill probably do another simpler one, when i get a pencil. i learned how to do that character by some dude on youtube a long time ago, decided id use it :]
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