I'd worry less about the letters and more about color scheme. As long as its legible most parents wont know the difference.

Anyway I'd make the first H smaller, and thats it i guess. nice r.

 

thanks dude, yeh i made the first H smaller but i still dont like it, just looks off but w.e, any suggestions for a color scheme?

 

'bootin

 

Ok I'll do one with you, shoot me a naked when you get the chance. I'll try to post yours soon

 

been really inactive on this for a while.. i use flickr alot now just because i can upload straight from my phone..

 

wiz... c'mon man. all beef aside, you've de-progressed. go back to simps, yo

 

i agree with tasty wiz..keep at it man do em simples

 

^ thumbs are backwards

 

@ salix: i didnt even notice tht till you pointed tht out oops

 

That Q should probably jump off the golden gate bridge.

 

@ rasm: what do you mean by that

 

simp guy

 

queez i think rasm meens the Q doesnt look good, keep practicing the simples though dude

looks cool gatsoi, i thing the E would look better without the extension on it though

can i plz get some crits on this shit, i fuked up on the E in the pen one and something bout the D in the top one seems off, i think its too small...also did a similar "force" thing that mild does which was inspired by him and other pics i saw with similar affects

 

I think you should start experimenting with your letters(bends and such). Maybe play around with some fills. You pretty much have what youre doing down, and you should expand on it.

 

From back in 2004...
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he means that you suck and should probably stop writing queez as it is one letter away from queef

 

I'd say fuck with easy extensions rather than bends just yet.

 

thanks MN and gatsoi, appreciate the posative feedback. im trying some simple extension shit on that dubs toy piece battle thing but im having touble making all the letters match up :/ any ideas for that D up there?

 

no sleep, um i think this is the toy black book thread, not telling people that they suck thread, give the kid crits not insults,

Queez drop the u and do qweez, never herd of a writer named queef, but if so just do it just incase, keep up those simples just put more bend to your bars and flow, next thing you know it will look nice,