I feel fairly happy with the HA but not liking the ZE...

 

Get a real name

 

Get a fake name.... Oooh do you see what I did there! Comedy gold.

 

keep doing that just dont know about the E's

 

maybe try a little e instead of a big E

 

The name HAZE is waaayy too toy sounding... like that's the first name that beginner writers come up with... It's almost as bad as ACE or DICE. Really gonna waste time trying to perfect that name? not a good idea. Go to a random name generator or something if you're really that lazy and/or uncreative, but please, NO MORE HAZE.

 

fix the middle of that Z it just doesnt look right.

my throwies are pretty weak, crits welcome.

 

something quick

 

Semper try closing the gap in the bottom of the M. I think that throws it off.

Tasty that's tight. I dig the A

 

Tasty that R is a little ugly
but i like the rest

 

ya, i know haha. but cheers

 

The Rush... Comments?

 

crits plz




i know the M needs to be bigger.

 

@aner: the throw looks dope. ANE are really nice, but i have to say, that R is nasty. i would just do the same thing as the A for the R, but give it a leg. if that makes sense.

 

crit me

 

That G is ugly, Everything leans to the left but the A, the neg space in the F throws it off a bit because no other letter has it. Oh and the a is a bit small, but whatevs.

 

I like this one. M could come down farther and try to make smoother lines and rounder O's.


photo-59

 

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