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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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  2. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    Gettin funky. I like
     
  3. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    Attempt at making AMK backwords and forwards xD.
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  4. Benny399

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  5. ryda

    ryda Senior Member

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    just a quicky tryna sort this Y out then the a left the a really basic just hacin trouble gettin the tail of my Y to fit in

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    Rough sketch by rydergraffiti, on Flickr
     
  6. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    Friz - Go simpler, I have no idea what that says
    MN Nice - Like the piece its clean, not really feeling the extra shit on the B, can see you wanted it so be symmetrical but doesnt really work imo
    Zoop - Not too bad maybe take a step back and go a little simpler for now
    Kaser - Both those looking pretty good, just watch how your letters overlap, looks kinda funny in second one cuz its black with white outline, nice tho.
    Ryda - Looks nice, maybe try and not add so much extra bars and arrows and try and try and make the letters fit together more, it kinda looks like 4 completely different letters from 4 different pieces thrown into one, try and make all the letters have a similar style.

    First piece ive finished in weeks, trying to get a bit more motivated to draw, crits would be nice.
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  7. NEwker

    NEwker Senior Member

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    it's whack, but to go with the general flow of your other letters, you should maybe just try a simple style y like that? also, try keeping consistency in your bars. your R has nice thick bars, whereas your D is really thin in comparison. There is a lot of dead space at the top between your D and A also. But, this is the Toy section, and this is just the blind leading the blind in a way. Hopefully my sketch can help you out somewhat though my dude.

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    @ EARS - It's a nice simp. Not feeling the straight top right of the E, though it kinda fits. The S looks too round imo. Try giving it a solid horizontal top bar, kinda shape it a little like a 5 I guess? that'd help consistency i think.
     
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  8. ryda

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    @NEwker cheers dude thats kinda how i had my y before but some said it looked whack so just played around with it the d i was using the thin line at the bottom as the thin line bringing the leg out of the backbone of the r tryed to keep the top swoop of the d thicker but again jus gonna keep at it and keep goin
     
  9. Willis1989

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  10. ryda

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  11. blackmath

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    Now just work that D and A closer. Make some of the bars real fat like the leg on your R or the bottom of your Y, it'd be easier to take up dead space and fit them together that way. Kinda iffy about that Y though
     
  12. blackmath

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    Sketchin, tryin to paint this today at some point. I hate the fucking letter E.
    Oh and the little notch on the top right leg of the K

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  13. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    black - fix the top bar of the E; make it like the bottom bar
     
  14. blackmath

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    Word thanks Im gonna draw another one right now
     
  15. ryda

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    cheers blackmath its just not workin for me at the min lol

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    Blackbook by rydergraffiti, on Flickr

    another quick one i know my r looks like a B here but was just a quickie chunked up the d and tha a a bit
     
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  16. DontEvenCareAnymore

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    Ryda- D+A looks much better. could put a character next to the "A" with that much extra space, fix the "R" and you'll be set.
     
  17. ryda

    ryda Senior Member

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    gonna quit for the night be sweet il be gettin on it tomorrow evening!
     
  18. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    ryda - make the R bigger, its way to small compared to the other letters
     
  19. blackmath

    blackmath Senior Member

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    Muuuuch better, only thing I can say now is what EWL said, either the R bigger or the A a little smaller
     
  20. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Exchange with my homie.

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