thanks halo, yeh sure. you write swine right?

 

Damn Kaze. Stepping it up quicklike. I was getting bored of your dvise simps popping up all over the place, those Remz are dope as hell dude! The top R is so dope, you should definitely exchange with me too! Revom. What do you want me to drop?

 

Thanks newk, yeh im down for sure, just do a dvise/devise with or with out the R, wat ever u prefer

 

kaze- really like the last REM especialy the M

Fake- simple it down a bit and fatten your bars to close some space whilst doing simps thicker bars look better.

havent posted in a while, are my handies getting better? also i got ripped on for my colouring last time so i did a decent job of this one to prove i can colour nicely.

 

Kaze - I feel that Deviser alot! Clean and simple...
Semp - I think you should try to clean those lines... Fill in is nice...

I'm working on this. Bottom of the 'R' should have been a little more to the right...ZYTR.

 

first time posting im trying any crits would be awesome

 

semp - try using a thinner marker your fills n letters look good just abit messy and i read your handstyle as SOME

 

sorry havent posted in a while been bombing it up with a new writer met two new writers got beef not happy bout that

 

Thanks semp, urs looks good, i like that E u did. Maybe u shoulda made the light blue outline thing thicker so it pops more, good stuff man keep at it

Thanks ratyzone, cool stuff and funky style, only thing is when i first looked at it i thought your R was an E

paranoia take it bak a step or 2, rock some simples

quees ur S's and the bottom 3 Q's look good but those W's are really lacking, just do a regular W like the one i just typed or a rounded W but loose those random bends and id just do a regular E, wether its lower case, capital, straight, or a rounded backwords "3" E

 

ok kaze ill take that to the paper thanks man

 

Queez - You should try to have the same proportion in all you letters. Your 'E' and 'S' looks slim beside your 'QW'... You should try to turn those 'E' upside down, it would be more like your tags... Maybe a shadow or a 3D too.. That's my 2 cents...

 

i remembered venom said
"ryder, stick to doing shit like the last flick (the color blend one) just without the gray bullshit in the background.. develop that style, it might just work out for you. because your other shit is bad"
so i took his advice last night and started drawing it again so ive gon from this

Ryder colour blend by rydergraffiti, on Flickr

to these


Blackbook entry by rydergraffiti, on Flickr


Black book by rydergraffiti, on Flickr

 

interesting style, the r doesn't look right though i think it needs a back.

trying to post every night again. neither is clean but fuck it, the second one is an experiment so don't be too harsh on the letters and ignore the highlights, had to use a white pencil and it looks like shit. also how am i going progression wise for 6 months?
EDIT: I cleaned up the top bars on the second E I just can't be bothered changing the pic.

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crits and sorry for the random green the cap was brighter than on paper lol

 

give the W a dip up in the bottom portion

shitty math homework

 

Really feeling it Guster. With some color that would be fucking dope.

Crits? I'm just tryin some new stuff

 

quickie for laze, will do something up with colour after work bro,

 

That first one is pretty dope. The "Sentry" looks great.