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@Semp Word dude, I rarely draw or anything since Im not in school atm

@Junglizt dope flow on both of your last pieces yo

@Dreams that Trace is kinda funky dude. Its kinda hard to distinguish your letters.

@Syco Some of your shit looks alright but Loon is right about your color schemes. As well it kinda seems like you try to hard to throw down a mad crazy wildstyle. Tone down the extensions, bends and colors.

@Loon colors are fresh but the letters in your pieces need a lot of work dude. Your letters dont support the style of extensions you try. Throw looks nice though

@Queez your simples usually look pretty nice yo. I'd work on the bottom lobe of the B though, its just funky looking

@Sound Drop the colors, drop the extensions and work on keyboard letters. Black and white simples.

@Halo lose the negative space between the letters. Dont sketch in pen till you have your spacing properly, just work in pencil so you can adjust it as you see fit.

@Trife not even gonna bother with crits cause you dont listen to anyone lol

 

Eh if only I used better markers for the outline haha, dem 20 cent markers tho. Crits on everything but shadow.

 

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@Loon I think if you moved the L over to the right a bit that piece would look alot more together.

@scma like the idea, maybe extend the top of the E, rest looks good

 

Havent posted in a long while
Crits?

 

zossqo that looks sick, what markers ya using.

 

Touch markers bro they're pretty decent for the cost

 

Dont wanna flood the thread but where ya get them haha.

 

i have no idea why i wrote eat shit and die on the first one
tips? not really feeling any of the D's

 

Another sketch.

 

Loon im not the best myself, I will tell you some stuff tho.
Dont do arrows if they dont have groove to them sometimes I do full pages of ways I can have arrows coming off, I needa work on that aswell.
If u wanna get better faster change your name from a toy to toy it is hard to make two o's flow.
Space it out. that N is huge it takes up almost half. The bar the arrow comes is fucked up also on the L when the bar connects to the bottom one I
normally cut it short for more opportunities. Some of your shit is fine the extensions need to be taken off.
Hope it helps just doing the same shit haha.

 

not finished, but what do you guys think.

 

crits?

 

crits?

 

Old pic - '97

 

1997? damn that was a while ago....
can you post your most recent aswell? its allways nice to see progress

@scma: really like that R, thoug in my opinion that arrow extention on it isnt nescessarry
@squeez: sorry not really digging it, think simpler is better

 

Nicer lines like you requested Semp. I dont really ever take that much time on the outline of a letter but if it means the work will look better.

Crits welcome