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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. noad215

    noad215 Senior Member

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  2. bugs-one

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  3. Hrzy

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    Anything i should improve/change?
     
  4. #throwup

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  5. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Just my 2cents, try to make the R and the D look more like an R and D. Also maybe make you Z a little more stylish. Other than that it's cool.
     
  6. noad215

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  7. bugs-one

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    ^^^ Noad, your N looks like a weird B, your O looks like a D, your A looks just awkward and your D looks like a lower case b. Try redoing it and loosen up the flow.
     
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  9. bugs-one

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    ^^^ Not bad. Just loosen up the flow so it doesn't look so shaky and work on that A, give it a little more style. That A is not helping at all.
     
  10. SAYO

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    Yo do any of yall know if any one is Writin Pell. Like I am Currently writing Gavel but I can't seem to find my flow. Any pointers on what I should do?
     
  11. Dreg one

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    ^Not that I know of but I wouldn't be surprised that SOMEONE SOMEWHERE writes PELL. I don't suggest the same letter twice in a row but thats up to you.

    NOAD, keep drawing, I have always found that others writing my letters helps, take some or all of this if you want. Photo 25.jpg
     
  12. Dreg one

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    That N is fucked, don't use that haha, but keep working the letters.
     
  13. noad215

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    ^ thank you! Yeah I only know a few others that write but no one really helps me haha.
     
  14. Hrzy

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    crits n advice?
     
  15. noad215

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    Don't worry about the rest if the tag but I think I'm in my way to solving my terrible "a" problem.
     
  16. osber

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    Keep packin your pages like that and it will get better
     
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  18. ZenithONE

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    @Noad

    I really like your style but your A kinda looks like an R in the last one
     
  19. osber

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    ANoad, try punchin holes in your letters with somethin other than lines and crosses, have fun with it if ya do
     
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  20. bugs-one

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    Overall I like the orange one. That is not really working, it's too different from the other letters. Only other thing is loosen your flow, it'll help give you cleaner lines.