Eido im not trying to be funny but where is the rest of it…somehow i feel something is missing …it looks like you xacto knifed the letters right off the page

 

I'm pretty sure that's not the finished product syco, he probably started with the background for some reason. I wonder what it will look like when it's colored.

Here's a thing

 

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like how the letters are coming together clap.

 

nice, looking good, kinda feel like there's something missing though.


Here's a small thing I did. Get it.

 

@ghettopicasso, Try wider lines. Your letter estructure needs some work, when i started on that i did stuff like that so..keep doing bro

@Eido, that background and the flames are cool, but i think they dont match very well with the piece colors, and also i cant read eido anywhere. And i think the piece is to big to that canvas.
@nicktips, i prefer some letters with 3D,but yea

 

ignore the 2nd image i cant delete it

 

^^^ What the flying fuck is that?

 

Lmao, sorry! Ok i'll try to ease it and edit out that crap. I feel like an asshole now.

 

@Pinthetailon.
NO, Just don't.

 

This guy turned writing into a science class

 

I was just asking for one damn piece of advice. Is this not the toys forum? I'm actually trying because I want to learn so please try to help me if you're gonna bash on my shit.(I couldnt delete the clusterfuck picture but it meant to be ignored btw no science today)

 

It's graffiti, not everyones friendly. After all you're talking to criminals. Anyways taking notes is no substitute for practicing and trial and error. I guess it's good to write down shit so you know, but still..

Also, come back with a piece and people will have an easier time critiquing you

 

Exchange work for RESP trying to work things out just don't know what to do crits of suggestions kool

 

Before trying to do pieces you need to practice some tags and keyboard letters. You need to keep it clean until you understand how to use style because all of that was wonky as fuuuuck

 

Just sayin, if you guys want to bash on my stuff please add crit, or at peast say you cant like bugs and loon pretty much did. Its forum common knowledge. Im not mad at them calling out a hot shit stain on their monitors.

Ok, I wasnt focusing on styles because I was thinking that in order to create styles I need to know how to Join the letters stylistically. (Lemme know if im wrong) but I'll do this and if I think I see a difference I'll post it up along with something for the community as promised.

 

How about you stop talking and post some drawings instead. That might work.

 

This video can probably help you understand letters a bit better.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=23XwsMqVehY

 

Havn't posted in a good min so heres a quickoutline. crits are always welcome

 

phood -> linez