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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. _flocka_

    _flocka_ Senior Member

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  2. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    The A is pretty small compared to the rest.

    Quickly from work with some highlighters and a dried sharpie

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  3. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Loon I wanna see you stop using those hard edges on your letters. All of your letters are round and flowy, do that.

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    I'm petitioning to rename this thread "Rab's exchanges"
     
  4. QUEEZ

    QUEEZ Senior Member

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    1437586058536853427635.jpg stopped eating just cause I thought of the B crits
     
  5. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Bend the spine of the b the opposite way. Other than that, solid bar use. Keep practicing
     
  6. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    Loon that looks good but make the second O the same as the first, if it were leaning the same way it would help the flow

    Queez id say with the B maybe keep the spine the same way but have it going into the top bar more, the big kink at the corner is the only part that sticks out to me, without that it looks good, or maybe make the top of the B the same as the top of the R, the R is slightly longer at the top and looks better imo

    Not quite finished inking this but thought id post now instead of in the morning

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  7. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    watchu talkin bout willis
     
  8. QUEEZ

    QUEEZ Senior Member

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    Haha good looks willis
     
  9. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    As much as I post, no one gives me crits or even recognizes me :( I HAVE FEELINGS TOO!!!
     
  10. Russian

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    @ILikePie Ill give you some crits, even though I'm not the best. I feel like the R is too chunky at the top, maybe slim it down a bit. I think the U could also do with some more space, or at least made more dominant. Then I cannot tell if a letter is in-between the E and the S, it looks like it, bit I'm not sure. If no then the S seems a bit distant at parts compared to the rest of the letters. But that's just my opinion, and I'm not even on the same level as you so you don't need to listen
     
  11. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    It says ruger, but I feel you on the tops of my r's bein fat
     
  12. Russian

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    I see it now. Apart from that I like your style! Feel better your not left out now?
     
  13. Willis1989

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    Rissiun/Ache - the main problem with your pieces is that the letters arent leaning the same way, the A and the H are leaning in oppisite directions from each other which fucks up whatever flow there could have been, make all the letters lean the same way if your going to tilt them. Apart from that youre on the right path, just make sure your letters don’t overlap too much, sometimes letters only need to be just touching each other, that said that’s one of my biggest problems too. Also, on your As youre just drawing the hole in at the top which doesn’t make sense, for instance on your top piece the bar at the top of the A is way thinner than the bar on the leg, but these should be the same bar. Make the bars create the holes in your letters.
     
  14. Russian

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    Cheers Willis. I just done ache to try some things out. I'm not sure what word I want to write, I'm still looking for the right one, hopefully it will come. Until then I suppose ill just have to practice with random words. There's just this part of me that wants all my letters to be touching, but Ill try it out and see what I get.
     
  15. Russian

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    Sort of like the way these ones turned out, any crits? Still can't decide on a word...
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  16. IlikePie

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    The kick on the r doesn't come out of the spine, ever. Makes things look awkward. Keep your bars one consistent width.

    Meh, can't really bother redoing this for a little while. Up to my eyes in homework and attempts to have a social life. Btw, I detest the letters d and n. you lucky you didn't get an "Ake" lmao. Pay no mind to the squiggles. Nigguhs be freestylin bullshit
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    Bumpin this over because I like the attention
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    And this just cuz progress is fast if you put in work.
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  17. Slushi 6989

    Slushi 6989 Moderator

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    You can literally see pie's progression over a matter of days (y)
     
  18. Willis1989

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  19. Robin Bancs

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    Ears sick page!!
    Also this is a little quick joint inspired by that rabbit sketch you dropped in the 'tots characters' thread.

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  20. Metic

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    First post

    Sup fellas first post, good / neg crit?

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