As a member with an L name, I gotta disagree.. I think his L is pretty dope, but this is my opinion. =)
I think the extention on the L flows pretty nice with the letter. The N looks forced tho. Thanks for the crits
what do you think Sorta new to graff, crits welcome @Zoup I like your peice, for me im not too keen on how you made it near exactly symmetric, might be just me.
@Holy. I like it. But you should go over it in ink and clean up the paper some... At first it was hard to make out ( could just be the photo though...) . The L could be different?.. But I wouldn't say necessary.. Overall it's pretty decent bro.
First change the name saber already an established writer .. Next try being clean with the outline a and lady this is my personal 2 cents I would trybletter structure and not addind so much extensions and arrows and dooddads especially when your starting out..and your sig needs a revamp as well.
Committed it to muscle memory; gonna be doing this shit in my sleep. How about this: Aside from other problems, the two consecutive F's are a real pain in the ass to try and mesh together without mirroring the first one, got a way around that?
You need to start using bars. see the tuturial/new to graffiti threads. you got a lot of options for your F situation. You can drop an F to make it Rufy. you can drop an f and and an ie to make it rufie. you can do one of the F's upper case and the other a lower case. you can do one f forward and then one f backward, u could make em the same but do that too (mirrored). repition helps. using a pen so u can see where your fucking up helps.