Ringo: That N and G need work. The left leg of the N needs to be fixed and the G looks too skinny.

 

Hey guys, been a while since last time i posted. Thought id share my newest piece and asking for some crits as usual! Cheers! Edit: Grammar

 

This whole page has dope stuff.
Just a Chief Keef sketch.
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Old sketch I never finished.

 

@Esone Dope bro. Love the skull, does it say gane?

 

thanks. think It was gone

 

yea that cthulhu-skulls pretty neat!

 

With outlines:




Tried to let the piece on the bottom appear to be this kind of broken-thing, first time.. Kind of weak :/

 

@nZane Bro your stuff is crazy amazing. Although with the first piece I don't really like how you outlined it all in silver. The piece on the bottom is super sick as well. The handstyle is on point too.

 

Thanks man, much appreciated!

 

And a different approach.. damn that Es ugly:

 

Alain at job

 

Give the R a round top, and make the second swing of the N come out on the side of the bar rather then from in the middle! other then that i like it! Ah and the leftbar of the G should be more crunched up to the bottom.

 

Is this something i could buid upon? Its just the second try and i got some ideas to refine it already, just wanting to know if its worth the effort!

 

Haven't hit my book in months..

 

Note that im doing graff for about 6 months and prior to that i had no experience with any artform...i want your opinions. You all have dope styles, ill possibly ruin this page... These are just some sketches, i dont know is its considered "blackbooking" (well, stated the obvious)

 

Loon you got killer Ls and Ns

@Ringo: Well done, looks much more better with the round top of the R! Good job!
@Suic: you are good and steering in the right direction, no doubt! just the S of the Suic pieces i dislike, they are cut in half which makes the whole piece sad