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word. well don't go TOO hard on the boy. he's still new after all and he's willing to take feedback. there's a lot of unnecessary and unproductive antagonism going on here.

also crit my tags if you got time~

 

Jfc are you even literate? Do I need to repost the same paragraph verbatim for it to sink in for your headass? Popping into the toys throwie thread to insult new kids tryna improve does not make your dick look any bigger homie. Do you walk into 3rd grade classes and make fun of everyone's math skills so you can feel smarter? "Bro I'm contributing guidance" then all you say is 'lol trash tier'. Either look up "constructive" in a dictionary or go back to jacking off over your blackbook but either way fuck off .

 

thats not all i say. you just fucking signed up to this forum the fuck would you know if i contribute to this forum or not; you just got here.

 

although gum has the grace and finesse of an autistic elephant when it comes to crits, what he says is more often then not correct.

just get better and move on

 

forgot about upper shadows
also i don't like the o and e
what should i work on?

 

@OWINE

that N looks like a K to me... but i dig the style here. its got a nice flow imo. the O could be confused as a Q maybe. feelin the W tho. the add on with the E is a bit unnecessary. all together a decent lookin toss bro.

 

Havent been on here in a minute and I come back to pissy little kids lmao

 

I can handle criticism just take that "battle me bro" shit elsewhere.

Could use some advice on how to widen the i at the end to match the other letters' width

 

looks like a throwie to me... i would stay away from crowns in general.

 

Playerd wda letters a bit, always fucking up circles
Should i stick to this throw and master it?

 

I think that's pretty good, obviously never stick to one throw and try to get a better one. Like it's pretty good but it's not an insanely good throw.

 

personally i like sticking to the same-ish toss...

 

Out of town throwie

 

Yeah but you don't just stick with the first throw you ever do, and I think the throw you settle on should be insanely good

 

shadowing n my tag sucks ass

 

Do yall think mine is still too simple lettered? I kinda think so but s's and g's i find hard to change up to much

 

The w looks like one of those bronx style C’s the i looks bad the n is suppose to look like this



The top fold of the N should come out farther than the bottom fold.




By close in i mean close into the last letter. Hope you listen, because that n you did was hard to look at

And the e looks bad too. You can flow but the style sucks, go get inspired by some writers theres an a through z list of graffiti writers who upload pics on robotswillkill.com or the picture gallery forum on here

 

cleaner, but imo lose the drips on your halo.