I think the P still needs some work. Still is hard to discern that one. Also the bump on the back of the K seems out of place, no other elements of that is carried through your other letters.
The bump on the k is fine but put the same bump on the a and p in the same spot it would flow better. . The p is funky the round part needs to be bigger then the leg . Or you have to cock the bottom of the leg to the right so it seem bent and puck8ng on its self
Not in a dick way but you gotta fill it better . White does suck for fills in the beginning . Get some fat caps deff helps . Letter wise the bump on the back of the p shouldn't be there and the line connecting the negative space in the p should also not be there . The o could be more round . And the bottom right of the e could be smaller cus it has more weight then the top but the p is the other way around . Witch could work to offset but practice more . Practice stretching the letters top to bottom . Just to give your self more room to work on the letters . Hoped that helps .
I definitely think the throw is better than the tag. The only thing that I think could change with the throw is make the N look less like an H. For tag maybe space out the letters a little bit but idk bc I suck at tags myself. That’s all I can think of but I’m new to this so idrk
That's alot better . Only thing I would do different is instead of a hashtag. I would have made a little cappitle D . In the d