Basically I'm just saying keep the arrows similar size as other arrows, connections same size as other connections, and letter bars the same size as other letter bars. Itll help make your piece pop more and look a little more uniform. Hope that helps

 

HAWK

 

which ones did you get bro? dope piece btw
@illfunkfreaka: nice work man, was thinking about putting a skull in my piece as well

 

Thanks homie

 

illfunkfreaka, i like that alot man

 

Dat's fiyyaaa bro. I think that's my favorite one from you so far

 

Gracias amigo

 

Thanks dude much appreciated, I'm pretty stoked on it myself

 

Some cheap ass Sakura knockoffs lol. I was being a penny pincher and got this set that had like 5 for $6 lol. I'm about to give them to my 6yr old niece to play around with.

 

I like your piece but if I can give a little critique, the purple background/ forcefield swallows the piece. Next time try going with a lighter/ brighter shade or color to make the piece pop out. The pixelated backdrop is hard body, I'm digging it bro

 

Thanks man, I appreciate it. I had limited resources as far as markers go. I gotta go get more colours. It really didn’t turn out the way i’d Have liked, but I only had a few colours to play with. Posted it anyway even though I’m not happy with it. Because fuck it. But I’ll get more markers, more colours next pay day. Them fuckers aren’t cheap. But thanks for the crit man. Cheers

 

okay, imo gelly roll quality is really inconsistent. better use something with a pump mechanism to make sure the pigments don't get stuck inside the pen.
anyway, here's my hawk piece with posca pc1mr in use:

 

Nice consistent letter structer shape and size .

 

This is by far the best battle I've seen since I joined the forum. This kind of competition brings everybody's skills up!! I hope we can keep this level up and really make this thread FIRE!!!

 

I know how it is fam lol. Looking forward to seeing your next piece, keep doing your thing

 

Yeah, everybody's bringing it. Takes me back to when Bugs was running this thread and all the writers were bringing their a-game every week. Gotta keep the momentum going

 

Looking at were you was practicing your w's, you right on track. Keep doing what you doing, you'll get there

 

Thanks brother. I got a few new colours this afternoon. I might have another crack at it later on. Working on one for the official June battle, so we’ll see how that goes.

 

Good luck bro