Yo guys, glad forums are still alive and well. I been booking a lot recently and just finished this RIP KING ROBBO piece as he the UK GOAT. If anyone is down for doing swaps message me. Ignore the shines as they got a bit messed up when scanning in, but all feedback is appreciated
Gone: few things. Think that piece would look better if the letters were more the same size and level, it kind of expands and lifts up starting at the B on. Also really a fan of making your outline fit the page. Not like you can't go off the page, but that wouldn't really translate to something you could do on a wall unless you paint the end of the wall. Plus if that outline were on the page you could continue that green cloud like it is on the 1st R, would help the overall look. A little shadow might help where some of the letters overlap. The E into the R needs fixing, not sure what you went for there but it scrunched together instead of looking like where the other letters come together/overlap. For now, pick one direction for your 3d and have all the letters follow that. Your 3d is all over the place. It's also hurting your letters. Look at the 1st R, at the legs. That 3d is more of a black hole, if it were as thin as the top right of that R then the legs of the R would be better defined in your piece instead of getting lost in the hole. Keep working on your letters, the first 3 look like you put more effort in them, the last 2 start to bloat and lose their form. Zoup- will caution against an inward 3d on that outline. Believe it would look better going maybe right or left. No matter how you do it, I wouldn't go so thick with it on the Y and the G, it takes away from the form of those letters on the top right of the Y and the bottom left of the G. Would suggest tracing that outline and making the Y & G 3ds around 1/2 the size you did and see if it looks a little nicer.
I just drew an LVK peace and a bunny with a mask on and a wraith i will post it pretty soon someone try to draw a bunny wit a mask on
Good simps . keep doing them . thinkin up your out line . other then that keep doing your thing . Clean them nails good lawd .
You definitely have SOME background in drawing, it shows, and by the looks of it you got basic letter structure under control. Id say keep experimenting with them letters. progress takes hell of a long time just practice as often as possible.
Yer characters will come lol don’t you worry just concentrating on my letters at mo here’s one I just did with a train in rough sketch