Keep your letters the same size... The forcefield is kind inconsistent and should probably be thiner.
blah blah work in progress View attachment 285152 watcha thinkay..tryna add wierd shit to my stuff...but i aint succedding..ah well..any weird ideas ?
ras i thinku should study anatomy again i like all ure shit with the hands cos it looked quite real but like just draw the human body in pencil without prisma colourin em
i dont think so at all its supoosed to be exaggerated as its a graffiti charcter.. altho yea work on the hand, but dont make it look relaistic
[Broken External Image]:http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/1633/314rs9.jpg what do ya guys think... crits?
Quit with the chit chat bring that ish to toy chat. No more thats ill or thats dope type post, they will be deleted. Don't post here just to say thank you either. we get the point. Only quality crits. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Drak- go simpler than that, the r or d really don't dit. Fix the leg of the r. go to the new to graff thread. Eske one- i like the e and s, the p and r are hurtin the top of the p is off and same with the p lose all your extensions, you should make your letters shorter they would look better instead of long and skinny. Amkah- not really feeling that, looks like frankenstein, but with colors you will make it look ok. captain- goood coloring but your letters still need work. what- not bad simples at all fix the bar connecting the h and the t and it's on point the throwie is ok but the W is to skinny compare to the h. work on your handy some and keep doing simples.
amk - the hand, work on it and the torso - i dont do characters so i cant tell ya what to fix, just that it looks strange
correct anatomy will help you understand how you can alter the body to make it look cartoonish and still good. its like learning how to do wild styles, you gotta know the basics of letter structure before going advanced.
WhatOne...i like the W in that throw...its pretty nice...the simple isaight too....but i dont think it reaaaally flows...as you have bars bent in differ directtions....id say..bend all the bars...but keep it fairly simple...yaaaah Hunting...thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank or the crits mate Drak...that 2nd simple..the DRAK is good...but remeber...keep your bar sizes the same width throughout the peice like good crits Edward.. oh and ESKE...its pretty shakey...but i actually like that S..its pretty eurolific....lol....i dont know...worj with that style of S on all of your letters...its good.... aight so im out for a few days.. keep up the good crits ed , sheep , etc. and most of all keep up the good work ! Peace ! and much love !
View attachment 285171 I know I was meant to do simples but I couldn't resist.I will get back to simples but I just love how this came out.
here she is... View attachment 285172 crits pweeeez drak, simple are lukkin gud, but that ish u doin now is like michael jackson what, i like that simple shit, lukks gud amk, i think u shud try an draw a girl? call me crazy!!!!111111111111111
drak-the a is to small and the k and d are to big. the r is just right. don't think your gonna progress real fast this isnt an overnight process. Im glad to see some heart though. ante nice 3-d shading but the pink forcefield is wack. your a needs work stop making your letters so flexible and weird looking make em more jagged especially with the style you are doing. Over all pretty good.
first sketch in a loooong time its for a battle against avid what ya think dracula....keep workin those simples ante............what does it say? what....those are some dope simples eske...get crackin on them simples amk...fire [Broken External Image]:http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/56/0624071408fr9.jpg
amk i would say that the only thing i dont like abut it is that it looks like there are far too many wrinkles at the elbow. that and those wrinkles look sharp. other than that its great. oh and i would say that you might want to draw at least some of the other arm. it looks like its missing. right now i am in a post deprivation state. its painful. but im down to 20 posts a day avg when it was 27... its a slow... slow... thing to fix. but whatever.
Yup, we're gonna try and clean this shit up real good. Flix and good crits only please, don't be surprised if your post gets deleted.