[Broken External Image]:http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/7066/june17005ud3.jpg tryin somethin new, not to hyped on the r, haven't figure out what to do for the o either, lemme know what you think [Broken External Image]:http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/5630/june17001hu3.jpg majik for battle on cypherstyles, not the best but ohh well
Me and my boy Amok and UVB blockbuster critiques are always welcome [Broken External Image]:http://photos-d.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v82/185/83/1380300231/n1380300231_30161079_6791.jpg
tazm simples are good, borg is good and clean. Baze has got flow. tonik? simples need a little practice. Start off with just a pencil. [Broken External Image]:http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/5786/pic1117ds0.jpg
Borg - Nice colors Stim - Nice character NOTE - not feeling the first one, but the second is tite Big_Pimpin - try making the letters even and shorter i'm trying this new style...crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/9554/003010pv0.jpg
Jers-feelin' your other style better...this one could be good after you work with it, though. Hungr-dope, just a little messier than usual, well, the lines are shaky, but you were drunk so w.e.. lol.
second piece since i started, a week ago.. missed the deadline for asek battle and stopped workin, to work on next battle, please just give me some constructive crits and thats not my handstyle, no idea where it came from honestly.. [Broken External Image]:http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/7711/dsc08119kg4.jpg
You don't have to be ashamed of your handstyle. I'm sure the bombing science shout out didn't just pop out of anywhere. You've gotten to far ahead of yourself, check out the new to graff thread, and learn to use bars to properly form your letters.
Hungr...your sooo good.. Tazm...keep em up those simples...but dont waste your time colouring them...aaaight
mourn- lookin fresh as hell, I like where you goin with the first one. Stim- that charaks dope Jers- I'd say work on that R Hungr- nicee Trust your hands- go... to the new to graff thread....
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first off resize the image, but since i have photoshop i did. I'd say go simpler, get rid of all the squiggles and shit in the background and get your letters straight before you do stuff like that. The O and P are alright, but im not feeling the T and E at all. Also maybe use a skinnier black marker.
dont bother fillin it id just scrap it n go more simple. try less complicated letters n before inkin shit make sure it's clean n u can ink clean
opte lose all the squiggles in the background, go simler and get some structure drak your shits looking a lot better now u lost everything, maybe make your a abit longer and wider like the other letters it seems shorter and fatter trust your hands - go simpler, find some structure maybe check the new to graff thread hungr- that is so hot not feeleing the e but i love that m jers not liking that as much as your other stuff but i like where u could og with that style, work on the r tho soo crits before i ink and a wack as fuck R, [Broken External Image]:http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/9335/seyar001rn2.jpg
opte- go simplier man your not gettin any better by doin wat you doin seyar- r is chillin ink that bitch O YEA TODAY'S MY BIRTHDAY!!!!!