aye here you go age...i didnt feel like colorin thO cuzZ i dont have my markers...so i just half assed it... but crits on both?? [Broken External Image]:http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/8959/dsc02148bp9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/4680/techbluewhitesd1.jpg
nope... thats just one of those things i just throw away. or just do all the letters over but in the same style...just better... exhale, you should get rid of that thing ontop of the c in the second piece.
ight...yea i shouldnt of added that...aye baze..that z and e are fresh..but im not really feelin the other letters...
Drakula: your squiggle is a good idea. but notice how the rest of the arrows are square. maybe add more squiggle arrows like the one you like? and close up that negative space. litlchanman: go simple. IwriteNASR: lose the pink bubble shit. make your letters thicker and go a lilttle bit simpler. EsKoNeR: do you really need critz? hah. Edward"Sezer"Hands: tht character is really fresh. TeCH: im liking the 1st one and on the second one i really like the character, but lose tht fill you were working on. 1nOnly Baze: damn i love tht e welp i posted this in the tot character thread thought id get better critz here.
Drak...i dotn think the squiggle is a good idea....its supposed to be an extension..and it aint an idea...id say lose it...cuz it doesnt flow at all with the rest...chill with the arrows aswell...your certainly aint ready for em.. Kelio..id say rethink your whole idea on sumthing original with your characters...coz i can tell you went with originatlity...and they aint original at all...they look like half pokemon half dinosaur...come up with sumthing else.. and damn...i aint been able topost anything coz my scanner and everything got fucked in the floooding.. so heres one to compensate .. View attachment 286361 im currently in the process of doing a " in the yard " theme peice..its pretty huge aswell.. sorry for the lack of pictures...i got tons lined up once everything is fixed.. peace and keep it up everyone !
amkah- loving this newer shit you got goin, really shows your progression, looks good, keep that shit up man
amk funky stuff keilo i like that pokemon type stuff drak lose some add ons like u have three arrows coming out of one letter tone it down a bit esk dope stuff i rele like that pencil 3d ed love crits nvm the half assed chracter at the top
i wouldnt put a long arrow/extention on the longest letter in the peice, kinda throws it off for mee, but i like it
Pretty nice your coming along from the first drak sketch i saw on here, only thing i will say for you is make your R more up right it kinda throws off the flow and leaves a lot of negative space there.
Drakula, the squiggle shit might look tight.. but it doesnt match ith the rest!!.. alll the other letters are cool though!