Mek man I've been looking at your shit for ages but I've never given it any crit.it's really sick man.The arrows are killin it and your letters I love the way you bend them so perfectly.All I can say is get a better camera. Scare if you liked that last piece youre gonna like this: View attachment 292884 Did this whilst watching style wars.Messing around with thick/thin extensions this time. And Emel how do you expect me to do something different every sketch?I think it's better to work at one style at a time.It's how I want to do it anyway.
no beef but drak honestly, it doesnt look that good, your a doesnt flow at all, there is waayy to many extensions, and your letters arent at the point for them to look good yet, extensions dont make your letters any better than they are, id say go simpler, but do whatever yo want its your graffitti
drakula.. looks good cept for the K but you keep the letter the same size and proportion thats good F.R.A.T.. looks good cept for the extention off the K and the E. make the same extention off the K as you did the M. oh and instead of making the extension off the top of the K make the K just go straight up. sky.. don't do arrows at the end of you letters unless you know how to. make your letters all the same size and proportion. and you don't need to worry about making you letters look complex yet. so no need to trouble yourself with the arrows and what your doing the the bottom of your s and k amk.. def feeling yours. with some 3d shit would be dope!
gonna paint this on sunday most likely [Broken External Image]:http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/9929/picture033co6.jpg a letter i made for this girl who went to france for the summer [Broken External Image]:http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4766/picture030bd0.jpg
you dont understand because you just started you should be able to pop out pieces on paper anytime that should be your goal they dont have to be dope but you have to know simples, and you cant just do this style crazy because you havent shown any different letters you wont get anywhere working on the same piece for a month STOP BEING A FOOL.
AMK [Broken External Image]:http://www.vandalsquad.com//img/graffiti/2007/07/31/wag_55443_3107_5553thumb.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://www.vandalsquad.com//img/graffiti/2007/07/31/wag_45830_3107_2110thumb.jpg Sorry they're sloppy mate, a couple of quickies cause I just got my brief for my design project :-s Remind me next time round, I'll put more effort in. for the bigger versions.
freakeenyc, the top one has an interesting style. but i think it needs a bit more developing. the letters look pretty odd still. specially the f and k, just mess around with the bars. tick, its good that your starting with bars, but everyone will appreciate your stuff more, even if it sucks, if its clean. so dont half ass it, clean up those lines. but work on your letters too. thats important. XD sky, (not the throwies) like tick, keep with the bars. fa sho. but the K and Y are pretty gross. keep working on them. and dont get carried away with the bends at first. like everyone says, keep it simple bra. amkah, your handstyles really developed. i like it a lot. love that kinda style. southpole, good letters. except the R. keep working on it. frat, i can see the potential in that sketch. i would try it again with different colors. keep the letters on the same horizontal line. and get rid of the arrow thing in the middle and the one on the right side. drak, note, you know that shits beautiful. heh. tryin to work my bars. gettin close? [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/media1-1.jpg other gross stuff. [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/media13.jpg
thanks dude.. incase you never saw mine.. View attachment 292938 hehe..isit okay if i use that in the VS battle ? sorry for double posting.. but Emel..im cool with you man...you cool..so dont think im beefing with you or tyrna cause a grudge Drak im cool with you too man.. but Emel..pllease stop moaning at Drak for this and that... let him do what HE WANTS TO DO.. not what you want...its HIS graffiti...let him take his own path.. it isnt asiff he isnt using bars or has NO knowladge what so ever... i aint beefin with you Emel im just trying to stop this thing you got going on with you too... just let him be Emel...he improved quicker than anyone in here in my eyes.. also " you wont get anywhere working on the same piece for a month " it worked for me.. and doing simples is the same style.. Emel...i think you need to go re-think some shit man.. and just quit instigating beef. just quit it.
gupe-i lil sloppy but the P is my favorite keep at it try keepin the letters the same size. something i did this moring while playing xbox live [Broken External Image]:http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7347/mehpz4.jpg crits?
loose the enxtensions dude and the way youve connected the letters together... also your e look like a mewts bite.. but i dont feel like digging for the picture so..... eh
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I love your shit Alive.Get some good markers and make everytihing clean,just looks a bit too sketchy with the byro right now. This is what I've done in a month(in chronological order): View attachment 293172 View attachment 293173 View attachment 293174 View attachment 293175 View attachment 293176 View attachment 293177 View attachment 293178 View attachment 293179 View attachment 293180 View attachment 293181 View attachment 293182 View attachment 293183 View attachment 293184 View attachment 293185 View attachment 293186 View attachment 293187 View attachment 293188 View attachment 293189 View attachment 293190 View attachment 293191 View attachment 293192 View attachment 293193 View attachment 293194 View attachment 293195 View attachment 293196 View attachment 293197 What I have been doing in a month.
Hot shit, drak and alive. alive if you cleaned it up it would be soo dope, not that it already is... Drak lots os improveing your gnna hit the big time soon budddy...
Dope stuff Drake... keep it up.. New shiizlllee... [Broken External Image]:http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/5630/dsc00057ha8.jpg Trying to develop a piece style so Im starting from the good ole simples.. [Broken External Image]:http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/7716/dsc00054pk6.jpg
EVERYONE AND I MEAN EVERYONE IN HERE NEEDS TO QUIT BITCHING AT DRAK.. Your clogging up this thread with a load of bullshit at how his peices all look the same.. SO FUCKIGN WHAT Its HIS graffiti...hell do what the hell he wants !!!!! graffiti is all about freedom doing what the fuck you want.. and with you guys telling what not to do etc. your defeting the object it isnt asiff he doesnt have simples down or he doesnt use bars COS HE IS AND DOES Hes doing what hes supposed to be doing.. and hes progressing.. i dont see anything up there the same.. he always uses different addons , twilrs etc. so just give this thread a break and chill out on him. now i aint beefing with anyone. im just stating.. aight. peace and thanks. And HADE fucking WORD MAN...i did the same shit over and over again...now im on my way to a somehwat half style.
drak- hot shit ive always liked your stuff. but that batch of stuff is dope mate keep it up. aint posrted in awhile so crits on a sketch [Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb149/azer121/STA60075.jpg
i agree with amk, stop worrying about drak and start worrying about yourselves. drak, youre D's are getting away from you, theyre starting to look more like Rs as you progress..... sec, youre 3d is wak, all points should be directed to a vanishing point breakout, go simpler!!!! a million people on this forum say it everyday to everyone, go simpler. stop trying to add in extensions and arrows and work on your letter structure. practising some different fills and 3d....
draks D's are fine. on their own they could get lost, but right next to the real R its clear. u need to stop with the color. focus on the fucking letters. i dont even use fucking color. and are u using BARS? b/c half the point of bars is that theyre ALL the same width. ur R and V are twice as thick as ur E's and emel, and whoever else bitching abt draks style, work on ur own, cuz he burns u into the icu.
Youve got a mix of sharp edges and curves on the Es and they dont seems right to be honest.. Just do a straight curve for the bboottoom... Other than it seems aite for a simples.. And what you mean my 3D is whack... everything isnt vanishing point... never heard of parallel 3D??