[Broken External Image]:http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture253.jpgi need you guys help to make this style look coll maybe some extensions? crits?
1. loose the arrows 2. make your letters the same thickness, not fat then skinny then fat again on the same bar.
Well it's hard to add extensions when your letters are so close together but the obvious one i can see is the bottom left of the a going inwards or out, or even do it inwards on both and make the two bars further apart although some people will prolly say caer bite as i think he sometimes does that...??. And then maybe one on the top right of the e? gradually you will start to see them. And them simples are great anyway.
dude we still cant see shit soof. im not sure i like wut i see might just be bbecause its so small.? speaker the phrase is dope. i dont like the style of the piece tho. i see an S at the beggining but the fill makes it really hard to see.
So I just came back a couple hours ago from vacation. Boring as hell but I barely sketched... I regret not spending more time in my notebook. Ah well, school's starting soon anyway... View attachment 295777 View attachment 295778 ^Never finished that one hah View attachment 295779 ^Ignore the mole-y thing, I have no idea what the hell that was supposed to be View attachment 295780 ^They're like fruits, get it? View attachment 295781 ^Shitty letters View attachment 295782 ^Shittier letters View attachment 295783 View attachment 295784 ^I saw I'd ran out of space so I just started to do some random bullshit hah View attachment 295785 View attachment 295786 View attachment 295787 View attachment 295788 View attachment 295789 End
bouncing-ah love ur style dude, characters remind me of the gorillaz for some reason haha but thats a good thing soof- 1st one not too shabby but try and make it all one size, 2nd piece get rid of that arrow thing in the first O
Knews- hot shit mann feeling it, nems right go out and paint. soof- work on your f alot. some shit from on holiday. View attachment 295800 View attachment 295801 View attachment 295802 crits?
good stuff there knews, looks like you added alil somethin somethin to your style but still there always seems to be 1 letter just not lookin right in every sketch, uve progressed a good bit in my opinion . . soof - start with the basics man, sorry to say it
YES bouncing is back. sema and soof, cut down on extensions, soof, learn better structure, sema, just learn more flow.
Gumdrop shrink ur shit! hella annoying. amok go to the new to graff thread.. seriously. learn about bars. ur putting in random bends and stuff makes it look bad. and keep ur bars the same thickness. do ur letters like ur keyboard at first. gumdrop i like ur W and ur S they work the other letters dont man the E is too busy and complicated compared to the rest. a lower case might flow better.. might not idk. ur R is pretty good but that wierd block thing at the bottom right makes it look wierd and ur T is way too wavy. i do like ur W and ur S tho. because they are simpler and look like this >>> W S Soof i agree with chalk go to the new to graff thread and learn about bars. ull think its the gayest thing uv ever heard at first (i did) and that it makes ur stuff look wack and kills ur style.... it helps allot. bars. bouncing crazy work man heres some more of the simpler stuff iv been doing lately im happy with the way it came out tho. not done with the second im gonna finish coloring and put in some shading etc. both say Jenal.