Bump! i only got beef, can sum one give crits

 

i think its prety sweet i don't like the c though

 

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and i didn't get any crits so ill post it again i never gave any last time so might be why but ya i went simple with it cause other wise it jus looks fucked up lol

 

are my posts invisible? shit.

 

na ur post aint invisible holmes, your at a very early stage a real test of your dedication to graff. your starting out right bro wid the simple letters keep at it and u will get better.

aint posted in ages - GUEST bsc

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Fuck me that is sick guest.Nice structure and flow.

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Not sure if I'm feeling this one.I might keep working at this style.Crits?

 

eack the only thing i like is that blue line runing thou case its fairly unique ur letter ar lacking go simpler and keep em the same size scab ur c is a little wide mr tasty looking goood here sum sketches i did

 

ok, try to make all of your letters the same case. and dont have those spaces like that.

i did a quick one for ya to help you out.

heres a simple blocked one.
[Broken External Image]:http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/1268/darkshs1.jpg
its not too clean but it should give you the general idea. thats the direction you should be going.

also, if i were yo, id pick a different name. im reasonably sure dark is taken and K's are just murder to do, at least for me. the way i did it was to draw out a whole alphabet, and the 3 letters that i did the best/easiest, i made a word out of them.



attempt number 3
[Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/8918/newsketchkq5.jpg

sry abt how light it is. my scanner is ghey.

should i color it?

 

nice. keep at it.

i really like that second one.

 

Didn't get any critz for it ...
Drakula - you started out nice with the d but then the other letters arent so good

 

@ larsson


very nice, except for the D.

try opening up the hole in it, maybe?

something abt it just isnt right.

the style doesnt seem to match the other letters.

 

bump for critz.

also critz on the new style im trying to work out.
[Broken External Image]:http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/6194/newstylesti8.jpg

i know its dirty.


critz?

 

Buuumppp Guest is hurrrrr

 

Eack: i like it but i cant rly read the a.
DemonicKronik: blocks. go to the new to graff thread its a sticky.
GUEST: damn that delicious.
Drakula: i like the letters maybe make the a bigger and more inline tho. and lose a couple arrows.
pez ss: nice coloring i like it.
larsson719: i wouldn't worry about coloring work on your letters some more. looking pretty good so far tho.

new name "escobar" critz please
and i know the bar part is bigger i had to use two diff pieces of paper and it got all un even. but whatever.

 

bumping 4 crits i never get em geust thats the best stuff ive seen in i while on this thread keep it up drak i like the eye in the d i would make ur A bigger

 

drak- go back to what you were doing before that shit was funky
aver- a and v need work more structure more flow
guest- u burn me
escobar- thicken up dem letterssssss

 

capo- wow...that is sexy + sex...i dont know what that equals, but i like it

 

painting tommrow...need crits...which one should i paint...or what should i change in the sketchs...

 

@ capo-dope



still workin on the new style....
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also this is a repost of something i did a while back. i was thinkin abt picking up this style again.....
[Broken External Image]:http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/7255/imag0003op9td0.jpg
should i?

i know the blue is bad.


critz plz