it aint really working, to me they seem like really simple throws. maybe try go more blocky? like the letters on your keyboard?
no its not better im not trying to be a dick but its true, look at your keyboard and make block letters. use bars. look at this. this is exactly what you need to do bruh. just keep it up. View attachment 299145
kazer- theyre all sick. second and third are nicest, props on the space thing too gcrolla- not sure what that 3rd letter is but yur other letters seem pretty generic. nice start for a throw tho just keep workin on it [Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MornSketch.jpg ran outta room cuz im an idiot. crits?
Cold; like the second flick. Not really feeling the first one all that much. Morn; like the blocks. IMO I'd work on the R a little; make the bottom right bar slanted er something. plan on doing a roller? Thesilentvandal; I love your letters. Did you use highlighters? Akshun; I like your letters. I'd work on your flow with them, though. SOOF; use bars. start simple. sounds stupid but it helps. Jersonetic; good all together. keep it up. Intaout; real good for your first. Work on the r, bring the letters a little closer together & add some 3-d & you're golden.
yeah i always fuck up my R and the M was an accident cuz i didnt really do two bars. but im gonna do another one of them in a bit
EzekieL/EzKiLL, too easy to kill pens.... View attachment 299220 View attachment 299221 View attachment 299222
morne - keep those simples up kazer - nice work keep it up ezekiel - i dont even know what to say :S cror - nice throwup View attachment 299244 Rip waster12 View attachment 299245