nez- in the first one get rid of the letters inside the letters u know it would look so much better without that. the bottom one man thats nice except the e should be a lil bigger, and the tope of the z shoudl be str8 liek the bottom of it yadadamean pron and real-give crits and u get them back jers-already commented minesweep-go for str8 letters man dont bend or do nothing to em make em fat and str8 and ull be suprised how much u like it. and get ur lines straight. stop drinking coffee and doing acid they give u shaky hands lol.
jers nice man real clean tasty nice stuff keep that style up minesweep i like ur e real u have to many wraparounds on ur letters it says ditm crits
New throwy, still workin on the N, and still in progress, crit? [Broken External Image]:http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/3169/hpim0452zj4.jpg
yeah so ok Sinn- I actually really like that, its very nice. colors are good and letters look fine, only thing I would fix IMO is the left middle bar of the D, for some reason it looks to thin. keep it up. Nez- work on your e's other than that the N and Z look pretty tight. Pron- pretty clean except you must work on your letters. start out using bars like |. once you get that down start bendin em. Real- its hard to see, from what I see though the letters looks pretty good, but its hard to tell with all those arrows, its like covering up the letter structure. (maybe try a sketch without them) Jers- looks real good, but the E looks a little funky. looks real good though. Minesweep- definetly lose the drop shadow for now, it makes it kindof hard to see the letters, fatten up your letters a bit too. Dim- looks real ill, realll ill, only thing is the T looks like a lower case R. nice though. Anom- that M looks pretty good, O looks to squished in there, space it out a bit. [Broken External Image]:http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/1988/img1853mg6.jpg ok so basically I hardly got any crits(thanks for those of you who did) mind the colors and the spider man leg, and the missing 3d in the middle. I messed this one up coloring. Crits on the structure would be good.
thanks for the crits dizzle d - Try to get rid of that upside down V in the B though, other than that it looks good.
Dizzle d- Fix the B Hidden- I like everything but the N but like you stated, its a work in progress [Broken External Image]:http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/5992/redfed002ie4.jpg Also just a sketch, crits? and it says Risk and the R is not flowing
Hidden technique. that is fuckin dope. i dont think theres much improvement to do. paint it quick. Dim. i love each letter individually. but together they dont flow try to make them more evenly sized. and a littlle more symetrical or flowy.
Mr Tasty: i love that s. klipa: nice coloring but im not really feeling it. i really like the first se though. -Sinn-: yeah i like it sin NEZ89: looking good. just keep it up. i like your handies. maybe make that e a capitol e. pr0n: no. REAL: i like it. maybe lose a few arrows like everyone said. jersOneTIC: show your s off more. minesweep: thick bars and letters shorter. dim: lose the arrows but im feelin that d Hidden Teknique: i dont know. that n looks like a m. you have nice handies though. dizzle_d: lose the random arrows at the end. i liek it other than that. Cyto Aka Son1c: i cant really see what it says. silentchaos14: now bring your letters closer together. heres my latest. critz? excuse the shitty coloring.
that handie is killing me that S is all over the place and the C has a different flow from ur other letters
fossil- looken good sept for the i, dring down the dot not bad, bu i think the N looks like a R, maybe just me. dont know
^^^goddamnit morne, bumpin your shit, let it sit for a while, if noone crits it then bump, thes letters need work, get some lined paper and stop wasting pages of a bbook
phlank - i would try to not end your letters/bars with an arrow, maybe its just me thoo . . your proportions seem off but if you keep rockin that style and practicing things will come together . . . kelio - it looks like your bars are alil too long n thin, thicker stouter bars may be easier to get down . . morne - dont pay no mind to borg man, its your bbook fill that bitch then start on a new one . . . but i did fill up the cheap lined notebooks when i was startin out . . .
morne keep using the bars ur deffenatly making an im provement but when u do ur o dont do the jagged things on the corners escobar on ur s there is to much space in between the bottom part of the s to the top part and the bars that kinda stick out of ur letters make u loose ur flow in the peice cyer dope flow man keep it up