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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    i know it looked better unink'd just cause of that fucking 3-d :

    since im posting heres a few crits

    k(i)ng:new to graff thread now

    boucing-fresh as always

    cnk-no comment..dope

    crimate-im feeling the first sketch than your last one try re-doing the last one and make the bars a bit bigger

    nar-i can''t crit you,i like it and i don;t like it lol i dunno
     
  2. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    ahaha... i thought they couldnt ban over personal ish... oh well...

    bounce-cant see it, but shure its dope
     
  3. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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  4. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    ok now that i see it...

    im not gunna say lukks gud anymore...gonna give good crits...scouts honor :)

    bouncin- make tha k a little bigger, lukks like an naked asian in a room filled with naked black guys, s needs a little work, i love the w, lukks like you were tryna make the k an e lukk alike so they flow more, but it makes the e lukk a little worse
     
  5. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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    save alive!

    and bounce, i'm definitely going to bite your k and e.
     
  6. Dial.on

    Dial.on Senior Member

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    knews -thats a dope throw man... u shud really start up painting.. u would definatley get some repect on the street..
    baze- theres somethin about the E i dont really like other than that its sik

    workin on a piece... had a sketch on here yesterday.. today i added some more phunk to it.. im goin to paint a piece soon so i need some crits to make sure its good ................
    ....................................(saga)....................................
    ai129.photobucket.com_albums_p236_ENTR_BOMER_scan0009.jpg
     
  7. Smae

    Smae Member

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    Coag- don't like them... and u're A's are strange :p
    South - it'd be really nice without the 3D
    King - for wot I can see, go to the "new to graff" thread
    CNK - thats cool
    Baze - nice!
    Dial on - fix the S and the G... the S looks like a B or a 3/E and the G doesn't look like anything at all... :\

    here's a simple one i've made(as u guys told me to):
    aa62.ac_images.myspacecdn.com_images01_122_l_44799b70f3085d23c0dccf75117f3d9d.png
    there shouldn't be that lil space in the A...

    CRITS PLEASE
     
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  8. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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  9. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  10. StAtiK1

    StAtiK1 Senior Member

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    lookin good whahappen
     
  11. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    id rather be gay then wack
    and compliments dont constitute as dick sucking, please take your faggotry somewhere else
    snaplol!
    this wasnt preplanned at all, just sortve went with it
    [Broken External Image]:http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/7409/picture173gj9.jpg
    damn thats messy
     
  12. anarchy

    anarchy Elite Member

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    Fire.
     
  13. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    whahappen i really feel none of your new throws at alll
    the letters overlap wayyy to much and theyre just too sloppy
    like i get the while grime thing but i just fell its like over the top in overlappingness
     
  14. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    yea, that last one was just bad, it wasnt really premeditated at all so it came out sloppy
     
  15. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    new to graff thread
     
  16. emokid

    emokid Senior Member

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    bouncing that throw is well nice

    ai197.photobucket.com_albums_aa215_pork_album_DSCN6843.jpg

    no advancement letter wise but i COLOURED it! with crayola feltips n all.
     
  17. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    sorri emokid i feeling it.
    it too thin in parts and the thinker bars arent reali flowing. sorri.,
     
  18. emokid

    emokid Senior Member

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    shamee did you mean you're NOT feeling it :) haha
     
  19. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    ^^^
    "English motha fucka, do you speak it!"
    -pulp fiction.-

    same- what ante said, its hard to tell some guy they suck and need to go to "new to graff thread'' when u might want to take a look at your letters as well. crit is crit though.

    still cant stand the philly shit.

    bounce- keep workin on it. its grime though.
     
  20. HoodRichSucka

    HoodRichSucka Elite Member

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    emokid - i like the color a lot

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    still workin... not ganna lie, the R was influenced by sky5 (obvously)..but i think its getting better...
    -d