gumdrop if its a traced bite show a pic of what its traced from even though people didnt like these, i did so i kept going, getting better? View attachment 302110 View attachment 302111 quickie freestyle
[Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSktch.jpg was gonna say MORNER but i ran out of room and just realized it sounds like moaner. crits?
either thats a joke or yur blind cuz thats one of the more shitty unclean sketches ive done. but whatever if yur serious thanks. nother one comin up. changed it a little, did a few little add-ons. crits?
who told you to stop doing this ??? noone should tell you to stop doing anythng in graffiti unless they are far better than you. graffiti is free expression. dont get pushed around on a forum. if you like it you keep doing it cos i seriously feel that shit and i think it can come out seriously original and very nice. ill have a new sketch up soon. ill post the letters then ill do a char and a fillzor OMG not a fill OMG OMG OMG i need to get back to doing fills as i need to start getting ideas for them down for when i paint lol.
morne i can finally see some improvement, your letters are getting to be more consistent-good. your R is still a lil weird tho try putting that second leg a little more to the right roolete i would say that you should try to get your bars more even, it looks like you rushed it a bit in some spots, take yo time!
i think that this is the best i have seen from you yet. really feelin it. good work. just try to fix the N and M a bit. so it flows better. [Broken External Image]:http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/2369/bbook018xb4.jpg
the s is decent, the e is to hidden, loose the extention on the bottem left piece of the n, its whack. define the T more, the bottem right extention is bitter then the top left extention making the T look like a C, the next E is better, the R is good. over all squish your letters in together, maybe slant some letters to give it more flow, watch your extentions. other wise, nicely done. maybe add some color
most of them are pretty dope, the one thing i would worry about is watch your 3d, its off in some points. and if y our going to make the letters over lap eachother with the 3d, make sure you keep it consistant. over all pretty good throws, lets see some pieces!
hit up new to graff thread, you stuff is poor quality, use bars and try and get some form in your letters. not to be rude, but graffiti takes passion, time and patients, your sketches look like they took less then 5 mins. take your time and post things your proud of. or things your serious about.
Anom...some pretty nice some pretty bad....i like the one where the guy is holding it ahahah looks nice. View attachment 302213 same style just a year later
the second one is fire, the first one looks like you had a seasure while holding a pencil.. i dont know what that was an attempt of. for crits id say keep your bars the same width. but its not a big problem. sorry for the individual posts.
AMK - shit man those characters remind me of ROSYONE, she's awesome at those old-style hip hop characs. nice one though. keep it up, can't wait to see you colour it in. Whiskey Tango - sort out your letter structure, it looks a bit messy tbh, and there are too many jagged bits where bits seem to stick out etc. and widen your letters also. start again, but don't colour it in - post back up here when you're done. a few i never posted here: [Broken External Image]:http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9934/dsci0024du0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/4711/dsci0014ch9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/4201/dsci0015rh4.jpg customized converses i did not too long ago: [Broken External Image]:http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3074/dsci0002kn0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2566/dsci0003ko2.jpg
in what way ? the arms ? i was influenced by her to get back into old skool shit. maybe abit too much. but they are just basic old skool chars. Thanks anyways
everything about them reminds me of her... even the writing lol. yeah i reckon you were a bit too much influenced, but nevertheless it is nice to see. sex_without_condoms: i've written 666 for a while now on my work. it's not a bite from the 666 crew residing here. i either write Sie666 (the 666 not reppin anyone, it's part of my tag) or SieONER.