don't worry about 3d and halo (what are those wierd outlines called. I know everyone calls them forcefields but that sounds so ghey). Just work on the letters until they look descent. I cant tell what the first letter is. the e is your best letter but the weird extension on the top right leg part needs to go, keep developing the R and O. here is something I did for klipa. View attachment 302269
ayte- nice letters seek- can u put some color to these 3d's so i can make out whats goin on morne- u pretty much got it, now its time for you to drop the simps man, u been stuck on those for quite a while, try a piece with dope letters now klipa- the bottom of the L is covering the extension on your I workin on progressing my style to a more advanced look [Broken External Image]:http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/5891/june17007yo2.jpg some people need to learn to give crits btw
*directed at daws theres no point even saying anything anymore. when you get your own style come back.
borg it looks good. I am expecially impressed with the precision you must have had to do the smaller cile bit. wow.
^^theres alot of mers, its all about location, i'm a big fan of mers from df crew fucked up on the r and s, but i'll get you another one when i got more time to perfect it [Broken External Image]:http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/1342/june17008bc8.jpg
seek- damn i think that the color looks worse than without...i love the without..its beeautiful. how long you bin doin 3d? cile-lukks peerty gud
Some sketch for a battle. It's suppose to say Straight Outta N. Karolina but I forgot to write the word outta. That mers tag is dope, that 3D looks perfct and right on point.[Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/8554/mecks002dr4.jpg
honestly. this stuff looks good. but it IS bastardos. usually bites come out real bad, but you do a good job of making this look like its yours. but its not, and its very very obvious. just look in your sig, the "daws" is very good and has that nice euro style, while the "ek" are decent, but nowhere near the level of the "daws" and by no coincidence, when you exchanged with bastardo, he did "daws" for you, meaning you had to come up with your own "ek" and they dont fit very well because the style isnt yours. youve been called out many times on this. really, stop. the letters arent yours and we all know it.
sumoe - fresh no doubt do me a favor and fix your desert eagle at the butt it has to discharge hole and make one that is actually firing!!! good work though for a "quickie" Two angles of my piece for today got school tommorow so I needs my sleep night all. [Broken External Image]:http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02796.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/DSC02797.jpg
thats actually a really well done D. the only thing i would work on is keeping your 3d lines straight, i dunno if they're like that on perpose, personally speaking i think it would be alot better with straight lines, but thats just me, other than that, overall really well done.
looking good cile. one thing i would look at is keeping the letters generally the same size, other then that all the extentions are looking good, they're making sense, it was a good move to take out the extention on the back of the c with the half cicle bit. but yeah try and make that E just a little bit smaller, and your good to go. also, becareful not to evolve into sume's style, its looking a little influenced, not calling a bite at all. just saying it looks lke it could evolve into something similar. no beef intended. and i hope the "some people need to learn how to give crits" wasnt aimed at me.