[Broken External Image]:http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/1499/picture279zs7.jpg To everyone i owe a sketch to:- Im buying some new markers soon But yeah Gers BDG. I wish i could afford new markers atm.
thank you morne u finally changed it up a little. those letters look much better. stretch the O taller. and make the bar equal thickness throughout. maybee fatten up the botom of e a little. play with the E its a weeker letter. props tho.. bastardo you do really creative things with ur style. its nice. daisy face. i dont like most of the style that ur rockin. but its all really clean and crisp. u have the idea of bars and letters really well. i could crit those pics but i think all u gotta do is keep doin ur thing. and itll progress fast. sinn study 3d letterforms and perspectives. the way you did urs aint right. sexx. really authentic style. i like it. its urs.
love it, its got a great flow.. i cant see letters for shit but hey ima post some of my 3d ish up soon when i can be bothered to sit and colour them..
i probably should of showed u guys the tag, its exactly like that so all those "weird" things were on purpose. ill still take that advice tho, should the e be upper or lowercase?
I liked your simpler throws better bigel, great detail, and obviously youre skilled, just doesnt do it for me, i feel like youre trying a bit too much, meh, just me, the bawksters back! [Broken External Image]:http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/5785/img005mp0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/5785/img005mp0.65e6b0822e.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/AnotherFuckinSimple.jpg took everyones advice and now its just another fuckin simple crits? whahappen- good as always
Maybe you should try drawing your letters separately until they stand good on they own cas once they can stand on they own they will look better together. Or something.
morne you need to go look at pictures too see how different writes make their letters work. you doin the same shitty simples and askin people what they think is pointless. i was at the same point as you once. take a break from postin your shit and just expierement. like i said go look at other writers work, not in the sense to bit, but to understand how letters bend. like i said expierement, and for gods sake mix up your letters....
Morne, ALL i see is you telling people: "Check out the new to graff thread, use bars, you have no structure, no wack addons, go simple" TAKE YOUR OWN ADVICE have YOU visited the new to graff thread? because your bars make ZERO sense, its been explained so much times, and you DONT listen, YOU need to check out the new to graff thread and look at the bar structure, do you see how your bars are absolutely retarded yet? Im sorry if i sound like a dick but it pisses me off when you, possibly the worst writer on this toy forum, direct people like Azteka, who is one of the best writers on this toy forum to the new to graff thread, wtf? then tell other people "no arrows man, go simple" while IN THE SAME POST you post a pic of the worst arrows ive ever seen, no joke, then you tell ME to get letter structure when YOU cant even do SIMPLES, and i mean blockbuster simples, gimme a fucking break, i would be MUCH MUCH more willing to help you out if you were a bit more humble and not so ridiculously hypocrytical. I am not frustated at you because you suck and have no artistic talent, im frustrated at you because of the shit you say, your sig, the fact that you think your at a level at which you can be battling cats, everything, someone as bad as you should be wayyyy more humble, i can forgive the fact that your crits are 95% crap though, even though this entire forum crits the fuck outta everything you post, TAKE TIME with your fuckin pieces man, its like you do every piece in like 5 sec then outline it with super shaky sharpie lines and then post it. Use your eraser, look at your piece, fine tune it, change shit around, try something new, then look at it, then look at other peoples shit, does it look wack? get rid of it then, look at peoples shit, what do YOU like? Attempt it, try to make it look simliar, sketch, sketck, sketch, find something dope you like? what makes it work? why is it so dope? look at your shit, study it, its trial and error man, do you not see the many obvious flaws in the shit you post? you claim to be knowledgable by your sig, so look at your shit before you post it, whats wrong with it? if your knowledgable like you say you are you should see some of the things wrong with it right? Anyway, here is how your bars should be structured: [Broken External Image]:http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/7697/untitlediy2.jpg Now do me a favor and dont ever fucking tell me to get letter structure again, hopefully this helps you out though, cause you obviously really want to get better peace
[Broken External Image]:http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b75/kidboi12/000_7321.jpg dang mines sucks compared to everyone elses
any ideas on what i can do ..... i am juss starting out and i need some type of help or flow ... so i can start getting the hang of shits
the sheep - thanks for not being the lazy one and saying what everybody's been thinkin tech14 - just takes practice man, read the post before yours, should be able to get a god idea