thanx man .... ur actually a lot of help juss for that little sentence and it inspires me to keep writing
tech- lookin ok for starters but what i would do is get rid of the line on the bottom of the T that connects the letters, keep them sperate for now atleast, put i line/hole in the top part of your E and make it look simliar to the rest of the letters (round, not straight) and maybe put the H closer to the C, im feelin your C by the way...could be good for a throup later. sex without condoms- some of those throwup letters are mad man...it kind of doesnt reflect back so much in the others though...not much i can say, just keep practicin..and with that piece try and keep all the letters the same colour, size and place in the page. heres some of mine. [Broken External Image]:http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/5298/img001uw0.th.png hey [Broken External Image]:http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/9934/img003oj2.th.png hay-it says the same thing even when updside down [Broken External Image]:http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9403/hey1pe7.th.png im not really feelin this one just thought id try something different....i hate the Y. [Broken External Image]:http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/1078/img002ia5.th.png Kinda screwed the bubbles, [Broken External Image]:http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/6500/heyyx1.th.png probley my fav.
BUMP ONLY GOT ONE CRIT!!! some sexy stuff on this page sex-fucking sexy bawk-those handies are dope big-el-ill as always,always liked your stuff morne- View attachment 303848 jack off to this ^^ fonone-your letters needs some work,do what i said to morne and jack off to those simples for a while
you say its just another simple, but you cant even do it well im not tryin to but you down, but you cant expect to just magically get better. fill up a notebook or 2 with just basic letter structures and bars and you WILL get better. you just gotta put in work DO WORK
fonone-the first is the best, last one aint bad either. make sure to keep in mind where it looks natural to bend bars/letters bigel-dope shit as always im jealous of your skillz morne-LISTEN to people who are actually giving you good advice. ppl have repeatedly told you what to do yet you still do the same thing and complain bout it being simple. everyone starts with god damn simples and they suck but they help a shitload
Nas i really love this this is what im talking about showing your letters more but still wild oh and if you still havent guess it says NAS hahaha
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Master Sketch By Me [Broken External Image]:http://file016b.bebo.com/12/large/2007/05/28/15/4034739070a4511603044b406447723l.jpg
amk- exept for the brown the fill looks awesome and the letters are ill ode- don't really like the E, and u should make the letters the same size, and take the arrow off the M,
LMFAO oh my gawd what the fuck is that LOL your other stuffs cool but this just cracked me up, sorry lol
A little freehand piece, sloppy as hell but can any see this going somewhere? [Broken External Image]:http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/3751/666freehandwb4.jpg
cyto- the E looks smaller than the rest, doesn't seem to fit quickie, couldn't figure out how i wanted the Z to look [Broken External Image]:http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/6610/nezquikieai2.jpg
south pole - you been doing simples for a long ass time, since from when i came to this site and still doing them, dont stop, youl have sick sketches like bouncing soul one day. whahappen - i always liked your stuff, since the day you made an account, keep it up , but, i think in your handy's there is too much stuff going on, like, idk, its just me. cyto aka sonic - your on the good way, continue doing simples. nez - bars = NEZ View attachment 303898