yeah pico go to the new to graph thread and work out some bars or something cuz theres a lack of letter structure. and ur 3D isnt right. and the coloring is whack. but everybody starts somewhere. bars are the place to be. urban pirate, go simpler. ur structure isnt terrible but it lacks a little. what did u use to color it. looks real wierd. rocky i dont really like it because of the extra bars. they dont make sense. like they just distract from the lettering in my opinion and they dont really flow with the letters. i like the structure of ur M the most. ur U shouldnt cut into itself so much. looks wierd. and the G looks wierd. the structure isnt great but its mostly the arrow thing behind it. shame man that is dope structure. clean that up and make a full piece. you have awsome Ssss. it is quite sketchy tho.,
I know it's an "S" because you said it is,and it's a similar structure to mine. However, if neither of those things were true, I would have no idea what letter it is. Your extensions are too big and distract from the letter too much.
shame- thats fucking dope dude. crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/25/dscn1748vs0.jpg
^^most of y''all should take a look in the new to graff thread littlerocky-llooks good shame-i seen you rock that S many times before+looks a bit to sumes stuff sans-lose those random bumps pico-key board letters could help you alot same for you asoe and same for you urbanpirate View attachment 304798 last sketch in days,,im not realy liking it myself CRITS?
need to not cover ur letter as much. and the n need to be like the TR as in the same size. i've bin rockin the S like that for time. this is a newish more simpler one. dont like it improve it tomorrow. or when i have time
shame not to bad but maybe loose the extensions commin off the ends of the letters that seem to wrap around...also either get rid of those bits you have on the s or carry them through the whole cuz otherwise the letters dont really match up. south pole space ur letters a little more and make them all the same size..but im actually kinda feelin those letters couple throws [Broken External Image]:http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/230/img0394un3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/876/img0397hp9.jpg ignore the shitty tag and the handstyle on the one the quotes kinda irrelevant.
urban pirate, go simpler. ur structure isnt terrible but it lacks a little. what did u use to color it. looks real wierd. Decos
yo man you didnt get crits cuz you didnt give any...there pricey things never come free...but loose the extensions...letter structure isnt good but isnt as bad as it could be..and backrounds mad wack.
urban pirate man not you ur all good lol...dope bastardo....you wanna do a throwie exchange? <--to bastardo.
cnk - not bad . . .letters/bars look like they get progressivley bigger . . . right side of E looks like too covered up by the B