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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. NAIK_SHOES

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  2. Sick!

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  3. bouncingsoul

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  4. NAIK_SHOES

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    bouncingsoul- I don't really see the letters but the flow looks good
    sick- I think you should go a little bit more simple fort now
    stonk- i like the burners and the one with a green uni
     
  5. Naysayer

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    heres a comment: It blows quit life.

    actually its not bad. color it so that we can kindof get a better idea on whats going on. you may need to go a little simpler.
     
  6. silentchaos14

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    chaos- your S is whack. work on just that letter a couple of times. The top I think needs to come down more. and look at the width of the bar on the O compared to your A compared to the circle of the E. Also look at the bottom of the N it like flares out all goofy.
     
  8. Bazer

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    from a couple of days ago but i just got my book back..
    ai190.photobucket.com_albums_z227_bazer6_ebook_SP_A1065.jpg
     
  9. BORG

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    ^^^looks cute, the b looks a bit thicker than other letters
    some of the extensions, like top of e, not feelin
     
  10. Protect_Ya_Neck

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  13. bouncingsoul

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  14. Naysayer

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    bouncing soul. Try doing the whole thing on paper. then you can color it.

    I got all technical on this one and didnt really like it that much...
    View attachment 307493

    so I decided to relax and not worry so much about the technicalities of my sketch and try to really find my style. Here is what I came up with.
    View attachment 307494
    The M is the only letter I am not that big of a fan of.
     
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    ai172.photobucket.com_albums_w9_pphadee_lojiconer5.jpg
    little thing i sorta did.
    bouncing so dope man, tables save the day eh? :)
    arma dope color scheme, your letters look sorta like a beefed up handstyle, still dope, im feelin it, work on your throws tho.
    silent, im sorry, but its horrible, look at your letters, they dont match eachother, keep your letters consistant, and work some steady block letters brah! dont give up

    theres some crits, can i get some myself?
    and if all you have to say is "it sucks"
    or some stupid shit like that unless you have something else to add, like some advice, if not, dont even bother.
    instead, grab a fucking shovel and beat yourselves with it.
    im aware that i told silent his sucks, but i also gave him advice to what he should do.
    peace.
     
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  16. c.n.k

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  17. Bazer

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    bazer dope man i really like how you bend your letters
    knews thats ill and i really like the script style you did at the bottom
    neysayer for your m in the second peice maybe if u bend it more downward it would be mor of an m rather cursive styled r, you'll no what i mean i think
     
  19. huskinator

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    ai159.photobucket.com_albums_t158_gilligan21_1005070853.jpg

    obviously not done, any crits from anyone respectable?
     
  20. mas$

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    i dunno if im respectable, but thats pretty hot man, i think the 3d wud look better if it came to the middle of the piece, and didnt end like..
    that heart extension on the G dosent really flow though, but yea as a whole its nice, post the coloured version