havent checked in here in awhile but im glad to see so many older faces still around and getting better. props to borg for the sticker pack, the bottom flick is his pack hepos' book. detail shot. airbrush on glass.. my homie suer did this for me.
Borg, it looks like your tag needs a lot of work. Krime, just keep practicing. Keep your letters on the same level and the same size. Jroc, lose the extensions. As everyone has told you many times, keep it simple. The O is terrible, it needs to be the same size as the other letters. Actually all the letters are pretty terrible. Bigel, I love the way you did the shadows, with the thin black lines.
[Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2825/ssssssssssssssssssstt2.jpg Just Keep M Simple until you fix all letters all perfect then do add-on/style shit O too small already said, just make letters same side With your R just lose the add-on again, and make the curved bar on the R same thickness throughout whole bar With N same with R, keep the bars the same size and thickness and lose add-ons E just keep same thickness with bars, lose add-ons but also keep space between top bar of E same space between the Middle bar of the E as the bottom bar of the E E<-- See same space between top part of E and bottom part This my advice, I'm obviously not one to talk, but I'm pretty sure I know the basic of drawing simple letters, take it or leave it, don't take this as offense, I'm just trying to help you out, most people just say one little thing about your simple if that, hope this helps
i swear you're never ever gonna progress if all you sketch is sloppy 3 second throws and do your pieces with a ruler. you got style but try takin it in a direction more... forward
BIGEL- good to see u back, and you came back with a bang. im really feeling those chracters, they are truly great.
sex-lets see some finished stuff! borg-im thinking maybe the extensions are too small and they make the letters look too bulky jroc-ehhhh I dont know why you insist on doing weird add on things bigel- dope shit, the airbrushed glass gives a good effect bluesteel- you got a pretty decent style, just looks a lil sloppy with the lines, maybe its the pic quality i dont know ok i havent posted in a long time...writers block is a bitch [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/um005.jpgquit before i was done [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/um001.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/um006.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/um004.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/um007.jpghome grown yeeeehaw
Daisy: its good defo going in the right directon. Bluesteel: i like your letters they lok kool, maybe try spaceing them out a bit, other than that there hot hot hot. bigel: im in love with the glass i want one of them, and the heps sketch is sweet as especially the E. Havent posted in baressss but i got a flicky. Scanner fucked it up, id fight it but im prettysure id lose. View attachment 310255 i <3 simples
ahah Voze up in this bitch sup mannnnnn gerron MSN geez Ultra...aint bad...the R is pretty bad tho....not really bad but isnt up to pare with the other letters...its pretty generic id say bit still nicely done and clean..
borg: really like the extensions man.. good job bigel:love those sketches and the airbrush aswell.. bluesteel:it`s really sloppy but i think it would look nice if you just take your time,and make the 1st and last letter more similair.. daisyface:really like your 4th sketch.. not finished yet butt can anybody give me some crits on my design/letterstructure...
jey- listen the scan does it no justice man ill get a better pic, its funny your the only perso who thinks that even amk said to me what the fuck is jet talkin about, the only thing i agree on is the bubble i shouldnt of put them on. Fluffy: feeling that style man i like it. Easy: im feeling that i think its sik, so stick with it.
Toui I checked out your shit in the Progression thread and you can't honestly say that the shit on top of the page here is as good as that stuff. to make it better you should try to make all the letters even, the "I" is awkwardly sticking out on top. also the 3D on the dot of the I is way off compared to the rest of the letters, pick a vanishing point and stick to it. and just straighten out your force field, it's angled in places that it should be straight, like below the "I" and "U"
ok man no beef homie? to be honest recently my letters just dont fit for some reason i dunno its weird. it will sort its self out i hope. xx
wassup im new here.......been writing about 10-11 months now.....crits and shizz apreciated... here is my shizzzz: View attachment 310270 random E trying to work a new style: View attachment 310271 View attachment 310272 View attachment 310273 heres a 3 second throw i did for the number 3: View attachment 310274
messer- coloring is good, work on your letters though an unfinished sketch, critz on the structure.. [Broken External Image]:http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/grasff212.jpg
thats it HOOTTT^^^ haha i know my structure neeedddssss woorrrkkkkk hahaha...but i got the block at the moment so im just trying to bash out whatever i can do.......any body got any advice on whats going wrong with my structure??..... [heres some older peices from like 2-3 months ago] View attachment 310277 View attachment 310278 View attachment 310279