if i were to crit the atmos i would say work on OS - wide gaps gives it a strange look (OS isnt as close together as the ATM part) and OS isnt exact same style, but its dope none the less

 

did you change your name?

 

I like the last throw posted, looks original as hell.

Envar, what happened to that one bomb you did, I think it was a blue fill in? You should try to make yours look more like that one.

 

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hello is dave there please?

 

atmos- really clean. the O doesnt flow good. its the only letter with a space in the middle, may have to change that. and yeah just bring the S a little to the left.
nice colours too

 

work on ya letters but nice colors

 

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good or bad

 

good can control but ur letters suck ass no beef or any thing keep painting but sketch alot more like every day

 

i was gonna say chill with the extensions and shit but it looks like thats just ur style, & it doesnt look bad, u make it work, u cant really read it, but its ok

 

yea, the letter structure is poor, but it looks like you can paint.

 

thanx for the feedback..
you`r right (huntinglol) first i didn`t noticed but now i see the gaps..
and the diffent style of the os.. scug905 i see what you meen to.. next time i `ll put the same hole in the o as in the a and it will probably look much better..

:eek mum..!! i really like that piece/throw looks clean and has nice colours to.., needs sum work on the letterstructure tho..

snozz: i like your fillin on the first piece nice combination of colours, lines look clean too, but teez and apple pie are right..you really need to sketch sum more

 

says sway if you cant read it

 

sway i'd say work on your letter more less add ons ect, but your painting skill is good.

heres a throw i'm trying out. i messed up on the k.

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poise sum 3d on to bring it out
jah

 

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Jesus Fucking Christ... Thats ugly.

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Not too bad.

 

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First piece..

really whack
but i was using dupli-colors
with the "Easy Touch" valves which just dont work well

 

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This?
Asper-Theirs already a really good asper in the world somewere??

 

Yeah that one, the E looks kind of iffy but overall it's decent.