*ding ding ding ding* i was talkin to daws on msn and he was sayin he wanted a style like hepos but its lookin more like a mix of hepo's and gesus'. either way its some nice shit.

 

this is my first real try at this and i just started this week so crits are very welcome. any direction of pointers you can give would be awesome.

first try.

third. (skipped second. sucked. hard.)

fourth.

fifth.

sixth.

like i said, any pointers would be great. i'm just learning this so everything will help.

thanks,

vdpntr

 

heres on i did during math today havent decided what color to do the can yet. sorry for the size and all i havent gotten the hang of using the attachments. crits plz

 

Cipe i like the overall theme, but you just need to work more on your letter structure. the bars dont line up and it kinda makes it look out of wack.

Heres something i did tonight, crits please!

 

love it bets the colors flo togeather so well. why you gatta bring the rest of us shame!!! just messin. great job your shadow is off a bit in a few spots tho but still better then what i got. what markers do u use?

 

yeah i noticed the 3d was off. thats what i get for not tracing the 3d with a pencil first. i just use sharpies

 

crits please?

 

Voidflow- Its alright but you should work more on basics to get letter structure down. Here is a lil something i did in SAC today at school.
(First time posting)


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hey... crits please... sez asif

 

trip- nice little simples but it dont look like u used bars, unless those are supposed to be throws. then they are a nice start.
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some simples from earlier today

 

ayleusone i like the colors but im not feeling the blue circle in the middle tho other than that looks great keep it up o and line up your reflections a little closer to the edge of the letter

 

cipe..... thanx.... im not crazy bout the circle in the middle either, it didnt turn out like i pictured it.......

 

crits????http://http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/6400/romeoioioio001ef1.jpg
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avore.... clean up the structure a little, try to keep the size of your lines consistant.... like the d, not really feelin the r

 

drone. that looks like itll come along nicely but dont forget to finish your 3d next time. haha =] and work on where the R curve in the middle..

 

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This is the one i did for the battle with XtitanX0 what do u guys think NE crits

 

stop battlein the handicaped, its not fair

 

from my blackbook

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ew dude thats fucking gross