im just not feelin the e or s... the n is good but the e and s dont fit in the same style

 

same. i like the N. I thought the E was a G. i would say just work on your letter structure more

 

omg seize does more than that throwie?!

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lol anyone can do that font.....

 

so? it still looks tight

 

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lol seize everyone knows that font dont try peicing with it

bets that sick bro

 

yeah, just to clear things up for everyone, its a black book page, not a page for a sketch. obviously i didn't make up those letters. but thanks to the people who realized that and gave props.

 

^ either way its nice to see ya trying to come up with something else. Your throw is the shit, but you cant have just one gun - you need an arsenal.

 

wat yis think of dese?

 

learn simples and learn to spell

 

Seize - I like it. I dont see why the fact that its not 100% original should make it not look good.

lilil - I dont like it bro. "Go to the new to graffiti thread. Keep it simple."(There should be a button that automatically responds in this way)

 

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hoostein. ah you finsihed the letters...i kinda like it but you still needa do some 3d (maybe) and color it in man...
uh crits : the c looks a bit like an e with that extension aand i cant really think right now but theres some other minor stuff...

i liek it

 

howd u get em for free?? just racked them. and im not on crack the firt pic isnt that great

 

Hoostein..some of the letters themselves extensions and shit aside are aight...the H and A are KINDA nice...but the others are whack....takin into account that only 2 of your letters are half decent...the style your tryna pull off at the moment being bendy bars....you clearly shouldnt be trying....but thas my opinion..

never did get crits on this..

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my god..
this time last year i was seriously whack...im still whack...but this time last year i was whacker than i am this year..

peace.

 

Mass your a seriously cocky bastard for someone who isnt all that great. better then me but u seriously need to chill with the ego.
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i know the I sucks and doesnt match the rest of the sketch
crits?

 

the first thing i noticed is that the right bar on the A doesnt match up. it looks like you made it from 2 bars and it kinda bugs me. the E has all sharp edges, where the other lotters have some sharp edges and some round. that kinda messes up the flow. The top of your left bar of the H is all out of wack. If you make it more strait (like the top of the A's left bar) it would look alot better.

 

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