steink, cant really see it, but it looks cool
sa, you need alot of practice, but atleast youre not tryin to paint
besar, looks good but the b and e need work, i like the a
a few simples

 

old version:
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new version, colored, 3d, and more.
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crits??

 

bones i like that ish a lot man those drips are dope... ah crits..the goey shut looks linda weird...maybe its just where its placed but i dont think it goes well with it. plus i cant read what it says ...it might be a word where those would look cool on it ... i dunno

anywyas heres some new stuff ive been workin on...new style:
1st try
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2nd (stupid scanner messed up a bit)
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3rd
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and 4th ...and this one was on the first page of the new book so i made it full and perty
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crits pleaase

 

every one of y'all need to do real simples your trying to progress way too fast you do one decent simple and you think you have simples down, i have been doing simple for a year now and barely have the shit down, go to the new 2 graff thread and read.
examples of real good simples.






if you can't tell tahoe is one of my favorite writers.

 

i did simples for a long time, and it really does help, ^^^you develop your style off your simples, the simps are good for getting good letters and flow, dont worry about developing anything until you get the basics down

 

fuck man last october was my year aniversary for doing graff and im still working on simples it takes long but yo f u determined and u actully wanna be good at graff trust man they help

neways guys i feel like shit cause if ne of u have seen my shit ive been writing arms and i went to were i usually paint in toronto and i seen a throwie from that arms guy in NY just wondering if i should keep the name or start writing ELECT or ELCT for short

heres an arms throw i did
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and heres the first elect throw
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i like the arms throw more then the elect and the arms tag is also better

 

new style and new name. should i run with it or naa. i did it real fast i know i gotta fix it up but yea.

 

It looks really good but you need to get rid of tha space between tha i and tha z.

 

Im not really crazed about tha first one but the rest are pretty sick.

 

Reddrum - do you plan on tagging that and if so how fast can you do it?
some more simple shit because I was deffinitely ahead of myself:



Crits?

 

^ your an idiot and i dont think i ever have to explain why.
rast- those simples are nice. feelin the bottom one.
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just a little simple.
only thing ive sketched in awhile.

 

thanks a lot for the crits guys
Ideal - your I overlaps the D too much but the 3d is nice. You have been posting a lot of really simple drawings for a while. Maybe you should move on up?

 

damn ideal, thats what i'm talkin about, best shit from you, keep it up, looks great

 

the sketchy pencil and can wrecked the overall sketch. the only thing id lose in there is the arrow on the E.

 

silent - im liking this alot more than a few days ago when you where doing that diffrent style keep it up
Dim - I like it but as said before looks like pube, i can see puge in it though.

 

just one bump for crits and then ill leave it alone... so, crits please. and i already know that i should stick to simples to learn letter structure but, ive already done these and wanna see what people dont like about them