[Broken External Image]:http://photos-196.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v151/149/8/1124520196/n1124520196_30084034_6986.jpg hate pushing the obnogs but this needs all the crits that can be juiced
D-stroy - i think you did get more flow. this tag is by far way better than the first one. even though the first one was still nice.
cease- try not to attach letters, make them all the same size...try all caps or lowers. you kind of have a upper case A thrown in the middle. Napom- thats pretty sick. just drop the a attached to the p Construction Dumpsters Are good cause they travel kiwi homade...
twisties looks WAAAAY better man. i like the top left one. undergroundanimal, i can't read the but they look fresh. decoy second one doesn't look half bad jers i'm liking it a lot anemptyswishersweet, i like it just drop the unnecessary stuff cease, the flow doesn't look good. don't force it revamped tag. outlined/shadowed in pen so you can see it (highlighter sometimes doesn't turn out in the scanner) now you CAN'T tell my my j looks like a y. i like the last one best. CRITS PLEASE!
i the middle tag is a fucked up so dont focus on it so much.... other than that advice/crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/5367/1002939io7.jpg thanks flashone
[Broken External Image]:http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff289/done4625/donedrip.jpg 2nd handsytle ive ever done....did it with whiteout..It was only thing i had at the time! What you guys think?
kosher - i think it would be better in a thick as in marker or something drippy. it looks like a highlighter. otherwise it seems straight intaout - im likin the drippy shit n the tag. i wouldnt change shit. so far its the really thing that i find that flows. even though it seems typical. anyone have suggesions how to change it. crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/8131/lovetagii4.jpg
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done - make the letters flow a lil more and i dont think you are ready for drips! love - that really doesnt flow cus the l,o, and the v are connected but the E is just chillin on the side, i really cant think of any thing about it, just practice alot more i guess.. flash - what does it say? cus the letters are too jumbled, maybe not, get a better pic! heres some of mine- crits?
yeah right now tas is about the only one i could read beginners should keep it simple for a while then try to make it look better