liking it except for the hat on the h

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Kinda a little collab with my girlfriend haha... she drew the little animals all over my letters... I'll scan it later today so you can see the details of the animals and such...

PS. I hate dying markers.

 

amk put 3d or at least a drop shadow

 

bump - last post on page

 

penis

 

bump for amkah

 

Zof- im feelin it man, diff, and thats wat i like to see. Fresh.
Whahappen-exactly wat u said about it..
Amk-add tha 3D, but make it diff. not like tha solid shit most people do.

 

Thanks Muse

Anyway, here's an outline I just started working on. Going to change the E and fix the crookedness, then probably ink it, then colours will come later

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sperm buckets.

 

shittiness

 

Clean it up a bit, add shadow, ink.

It has potential....

 

BESAR- I think the E is awkward, it needs some flow. Also, don't neglect the R.

 

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Inked this, going to add white highlights to the 3d.
Any suggestions for colours?

 

besar: ink it, trace it, ink it agin. then itll b nice nd clean

 

zof- your showing alot of improvement, keep that shit up
amwah-nasty, you should do the 3d going towards the character
sex- you know you got some sexy ish, keep bumpin sketches out
besar- letters are a bit off, i was feelin your other shit a bit more

quick outline
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bizzaro- if you cleaned it up and added some color it would look sick


any crits?

 

cile honestly i liked the less evolved version of this style, shits still hype tho

 

soank you missed a little bit of the left leg on the A
cile dope shit
spit nice i would go with the 5 shades of yellow that somone suggested
Sex looks nice but once again im not shure how far the style can be pushed prove me wrong
amk dope

dam im getnn lazy as shit with my sketches no time either lately

 

Take out the line in the middle of the E and raise the top piece of the R and you're set.