smile; i dont mind the S but i would get rid of the little joint that starts it, the I and L are to alike fix one of them make the E have a bigger pop out and personaly id get rid of the smily face at the top cyzo, looks like , you are getting ahead of your self but the Y is alright dibz, i like the second flick id fix the bottom of the N becuse it cuts off right into a corner hoes , i like it but would make the O a bitbigger so it touches the bottem and cut the H down a bit now some of you give me crits
On Your Throw Up.... Try Doin Just A 2 Letter Joint...don't Anybody Do 2 Letters Any Dam More?? The One Kid Had Damn Near The Whole Alphabet On The Wall....2 Piecers Are Quick And Easy....and If Somebody Don't Got No Skills ,it's Easier To Fuck Up Four Letters Than It Is Two.....
big ups chalk, smile, hidden tech, rant. View attachment 322573 this is a nice ass roof spot, but it was too dark to get the picure from the street so i had to climb onto the roof again. View attachment 322574 shitty little face freestyle, i dunno. View attachment 322575
hhhhhh: it looks like you got decent can control but you could improve on some of your letters CYZ: you need to work on your letters as well the Z looks like an E Rant: im not feeling those highlights in the first peice, maybe try using a thicker cap? and the second has a real nice outline but im not feeling the letters to much.
Over: nice throw, i dont like the O in the first one and really like the second. The chrac is nice too and i like that handstyle
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C-SONE nice spot, nice piece.. I would just try to make the letters a little closer, but other than that, looks awesome..
that monk is preatty good for ur first one and the guy that bit copes e looks like he went over a nice throwy too u should go over him
lol calm down he was just saying what he thought would make the piece better i agree with him and so what if you were twelve now your 13 one year not even a couple months difference big fucking woop shut up and take the crits
should have filled it. kinda dumb to cover throws with a hollow. looks alright though. E could be fixed so the bottom was bigger and the top was smaller (match the S a little bit)
c-sone- dope throw , the right side of N in your pice/burner looks fucked other then that nice colours would look better with a backround imo
this is really old. sorry about the shitty quality of the picture, it was pitch black out and I didnt have a way to light the side of the car to make it more visible. I had to settle for sitting in a very uncomfortable bush and holding the camera as. steady. as. humanly. possible. with a long shutter time and hope it didn't get motion blur. Then photoshop to up the brightness and contrast.
vagrant, you should of tried turning on like night vision, or something (if you have that on your camera). pretty nice tag though... well as far as I can tell, but im a toy also.