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real shit piece of mine, but someone took a picture so i'm not too concerned over it being shit as it's a step in my progression as an artist. Mine is the RB, both of em.
def clowny cakes that golf teef is ill.. spuzzy sketch more if u really want to improve as an artist. at least the letters are the same size tho. some shit i just finished doingfucked up my t tons
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looks good seize, but the 3ds look a little off tezm, work on your can control second on loks ok though spuzz, dont really like those, keep sketching clowney, i like the k in the fist one and the a in the second heres a piece i did a few weeks ago i fucked up the e , but whatever
Tezm:like your design but i think i would look much better if uve used dark outlines with a light fillin or a light outline with a dark fillin... seize:looks clean + nice colours..good job enormous:like the blue fillin aswell as your shadow..still needs sum work on the can control tho.. piece i made yesterday, fucked it a bit up with the shadow and forcefield but whatever.. any crits..?
good to see you straying away from the usual throw ups i see you post. i like the A kind of, and the O. not feeling the T or the S I dont think the T flows with the rest of the letters...they have a kind of box shape while the T is more rounded. and the S is too wide, it looks goofy. not really sure about the little add ons at the bottom and tops of the letters too. but i like the pink in the 3d, and the fill is good. real potential.
I like it... very clen. very organized. very pretty colors, looks FABULOUS! just fix the Z next time it's the only letter outa place... Can you do me a KILS? just for me and only me... you know in a non gay kinda way.
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what T? ...thats an I. Beautiful piece btw. Lovely colors. Good letter structure. Any mistakes are minor compared to the rest of it.
rolex, all the letters are decent except for the x...but x's are shitty anyways. elka, i like it with practice, but the K is kinda fucked up at the top, good can control though. seize, nice fill/background..good simple, top of the Z seems to tilt the wrong way, and something about the highlights strikes me as off, but the glares are real good.
thanx for al the feedback..i can really use it on this piece.. the letter is a T (like the one i normally use for my throwups/bubble letters like this one: ..and i admit it really looks like an i after lookin at it again... and i`m not really feelin my s to..but o well... it was my first attempt of doing this different style of piece so i can only do better next time...
i dont know man to me that looks like just a throwie with a 3d instead of drop shadow..but for a throw up i really like that m but thats the only letter in my opinion..an the t isn't bad either. and the edge poking out of the a i would lose that because none of your other letters have it so it looks out of place
huh... i think we have sum miscommunication here.. we were discussing this piece: and i think you was talkin about my sketch.....right..?