capitol- lacking structure and flow, lose the extensions and work on lettering roolete-not feelin them extensions, i did do a whole alphabet in simples if you would like you can use it as a reference for letters you're having trouble with ante- good to see you come through, think this is the 5-6th page them sketch's have been bumped, fuckin hilarious
i'm not so proud but, does anyone have tips on getting perfect lines? exhaling as you write kind of helps... CRITTS PEEASSEE Roolete- pretty cool i like where its going, not sure about H's Capital- naht digin it man, simples.. man for swoe this must be some like mad peice exchange, lol... what did he do?like madd bite or something?
borg-haha yea its fuckin crazy, i dont do simples but i like em, i think ima work on wm more... intaout-he got beef wit the whole closed casket click, so we say...fuck em lol eack-its actually not that bad imo bad colors tho
[Broken External Image]:http://widget.slide.com/rdr/0/1/3/W...LCOEyy8j_xFT3Yx_jNf2WjhMN9hHeagVzEUgdxUiw.jpg ignore the background [Broken External Image]:http://widget.slide.com/rdr/0/1/3/W...PS8RwsrgyivJckFlNc6pHHAcYj6j3HnbTkYjrEk0Q.jpg new throwie with sticker and sum tags [Broken External Image]:http://widget.slide.com/rdr/0/1/3/W...wmVS7OSPnIE1s1A6ivvSl9wm1NbsnNpo4ppcZbqcg.jpg please respect...we just lost a crew member on wednesday intaout- like the throwie roolette-take the extension on the left off but otherwise its clean luvin them fuck swoes....ban his ass pleaaase but yall shulda made it look a lil more like kwest...haha
intaout-nice and clean, its a little generic, try an figure out a unique style, oneliners lukk beautiful, so try some
holy shit fuck swoe simplels still going strong dope shiz ccc random boredom, not at all special [Broken External Image]:http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/2233/dsc00415mu3.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7743/dsc00416yn9.jpg
good shit seyar SICK!- work on stuff a lil more simpler. heres 2 new ones- not fealing the bottom one, i just did it like 10 mins ago... crits?
some simplezzzzzzz I really like this one except for the fact that I tried to add a little too much stupid detail. Also the 3d on the O is fucked. Very Simple but I like it. Character
new shit [Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/2508/s5001213we4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/2508/s5001213we4.b4d513db12.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/6067/s5001212un7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/6067/s5001212un7.20543670fb.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/8677/s5001211tj1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/8677/s5001211tj1.d1774a0d6a.jpg nipple bomb ^^^ hahahaha
keep workin om it 5funerals sex your shit is clean bumpin my stuff for crits...bottom of page [Broken External Image]:http://widget.slide.com/rdr/0/1/3/W...TVahviNK9XoUdXdjGvWewpDSY0Zcgtgm5t4U9macg.jpg
FROST - you need to go back to simples. Your bar width is all over the place and your lines are shaky. Also the letters go from bigger to smaller.
[Broken External Image]:http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/gross.jpg Needs work but it's a lot better than before. Need to work on the tag and the face which is ugly as fuck due to resizing.