^ I second that.

 

third,
gully means gangster

 

a maze = i like the colors, n i like the throw.

Cyto Aka Son1c = alls good to me..but to me the e looks like an f. i would just do that up.

heres some shit ive been working on. always open to suggestions n help.
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you are an idiot
maze-shits tight
oaks-you got potential nice job

 

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pen freestyle.
crits????

 

Man, jaze, all your shits looking ill!

 

yea ik i just meant if someone calls ur work gully its a good thing
im hip

 

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I wouldnt have all your letters conneted like that. It makes things confusing. Try breaking them apart. The letters look nice. Try it without the spiky addons just, straight lines see how that comes out. If you keep the connections, please work on theK to the R, since the < part is seppereated from the I part on your k's and r's it kind of makles this weird undecihpherable mess in the middle...

 

you are approaching crits all wrong
to get that critted at least crit everything on the page first
i mean cumon

 

Riot - it's cool but I would get rid of the cracks and scale down the Ts
Haze- the first and second are some of the best I've seen here.

Death- Remember to quote.

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Esoteric.

 

^^looking much better, man.

 

that looks hot but too many leters in my opinion

 

You said I should get rid of the bumps but it really helps me connect shit and make transitions.

 

well, looks like you lost a bunch of em. You have a unique style, and I like it.

 

thanks. I had been messing around with graffiti a year until someone taught me the whole letter structure.

 

oaks-at least you're staying simple. good job on that
haze-lookin' pretty good, but some of the lines look kinda shaky
riot- first, make all your letters the same size
eskimo-looking dope. the only thing i don't really like is how the letters like curve downwards

this was just some sketch that ended up shitty, so i didn't finish it, haha
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i suck hella bad at fills
crits?

also, this never got answered in any other threads, so i figured i'd ask it here

 

Is that CLoud breaking that building with its cock, If it is thats some ill ass original thinking.

 

Mosez - lookin good, maybe make the M taller on the second one... And don't change your name, Germany is fuckin far away

next rough sketch, crits?

 

mosez-i lov the second one ill fill
not so much the first one
riot-needs work
the buildings are too empty and the veins look dumb
and stop bumping it everyone
enue-finish the outline the ribbon in the back looks nice

my throwie battle entry

any crits are appreciated