i feel u son, the lower case A is wack though, n the lower E is mad hard to make look nice, feel me...all round, yalldiggin that style though
skuz-yeah i edited out the hole in the a(haha kinky) on ms paint when i resized it cause i though it looked like shit
I would say that your thowies and tags definitley aren't toy, but everyone has different views on what a toy is. I've seen bombers with the most deadly tags and throwups get called toys simply because they don't care for doing straightletters or pieces much. Oh, and Doap, that shits funny. Lets see some new pics of the throwie with an unmodified A.
For DAWS. 'Dawser' piece. I'll post up a bunch of my stuff soon. [Broken External Image]:http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/10/image011gh3.jpg
Well why don't you give my a good explanation on why? Give me a Constructful critique on what I should keep, on what I should change? You said you weren't going to have this thread talked down on the 3,000+ pages that helped you progress, so why don't you pass the torch? I need a little more than "I don't like where your style is heading".
[Broken External Image]:http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k10/Utopii/Picture001.jpg My throwie kinda sloppy haha.
Cocane-Color's nice, I actually like the E, but maybe resize or slightly bulk up some of the A Infoe-Dawser one looks nice, kinda a big R for me So, now that I've tried to improve some style and structure I have to find a new word. Not having much fuckin luck
[Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/grime.jpg SKUZ calm the fuck down. i wasnt trying to sound insulting and rude, im in noway trying to say ur not good,im better than u, i was talking about this k, im not attacking ur structer, lots of people have the same simples (like the k) to fall back on, most probily developed there shit of letters like this, i use amad generic s wen im stuck for ideas. as for me delating ur crits, i didnt. i read them and took it in also if ur gunna write a 3 paragraph comeback then good luck cuss shit talkers and haters on here are unbelevable, and about me reading the new to graff thread, i think everyone of evry leval of skill can take time and rmind them selv f the basics, from time to time mxman i dont care what u change aslong as its the girl,if thats a picture of her. but for real nice structer, not feeling he e, but thats just personal prefrence
Sketch, that style hes done is original and im feeling it all except the K. Nice skuz keep it up man.
dont get me wrong, im feeling that style, the s is fly, i just think he could add abit more of his unique flava on that k
o ye, it says sheltr. and i might just put a pencil 3-d on it, im not too much into colouring shit these days, just putting up outlines and such
[Broken External Image]:http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/874/mobyf1.jpg i need help on my handstyle... i already know.. gimme some good crits dont talk shit i dont wanna hear it
texas def get rid of those money signs either that or make them incorporated into the piece not jus thin lil signs that dont fit in and keep your outline consistent so outline in the b and the o try getting something straight rather than scattered it kinda looks sloppy
[Broken External Image]:http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/7822/remos15fj3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/8126/remos13vm5.jpg i hate how the 2nd one looks cuz of my printer but w/e
who wants to get down in a lil collab ?! hit me up if your interested.. all peices will be put togther on Photoshop feel mee !!! so yuh PM me if you want in !..you have to be half decent though