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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    thats the plan for this year :)
    peace i am out
    have to check the nice shit in the experience section now
     
  2. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Other than my T and H being off proportional anyone got some crit for me.
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  3. a maze

    a maze Banned

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  4. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    sorry about that, i forgot to. Rsakei I think your colors are off a bit, i'd try changing them a bit. Nice job tho, it's sick.
     
  5. jvillebboy

    jvillebboy Senior Member

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    hahaha. maze, im feelin the character. colors are nice and the proportioning looks on point. is it like a snake skull thing? lol. i like

    anyways, heres what finally got loaded. i gotta color and add some ish to it, but this is just the outline. i need some help with my letters though. please? lol

    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v334_puertolumbian_0210081708.jpg
     
  6. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    that's sick maze, and bread....not feeling the plus sign and the degree sign. Also clear the E up, the top line is too much i think, hard to see it's an e....if it is.
     
  7. RFI. SPit

    RFI. SPit Moderator

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  8. jvillebboy

    jvillebboy Senior Member

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    yea, definitely dropped a big ass e. lol. and the random degree sign was just random. it wouldnt erase, so i left it. lol. and the x...just there. still workin on it, but thanks! got work in the mornin yall. peace!
     
  9. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    nice dude, very nice. Loving that carmel look with the colors. I think the n, needs a bit more curve to it, like that top right corner of the n.
     
  10. j-f

    j-f Senior Member

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    i know this should be tagz thread but i put it up and no one really goes there and seing as it is technically a black book i wanted to see if any one would crit it here..
    i just wanna know if u think it flows or have some suggestions for wuts around it
     
  11. Rank-oner!

    Rank-oner! Senior Member

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    Zofone: I kinda like the Brown color scheme :)
    Amaze: your really good at characters man but i dont really feel that one. its not bad at all man i just think after seeing all yours different ones for battles and stuff you can come up with something even more sick ya know. either way good work and it looks good.
    Rsakens: yea you should go back and work a little on some of your structure but its not bad by any means.

    So this sketch was a speed sketch of letters i used to play around with. took * minutes and i need to make the n and K overlap more
    ai146.photobucket.com_albums_r258_rank1234_onlinetag004.jpg

    and my first one liner handstyles
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  12. Dying to live

    Dying to live Senior Member

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  13. "Fasho" T|y|B

    "Fasho" T|y|B Senior Member

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    ai37.photobucket.com_albums_e74_thedoppleganger88_Sidopure.jpg

    better sketch of the throw i put up last time

    ai37.photobucket.com_albums_e74_thedoppleganger88_Sido2.jpg

    photoshopped colors haha still looks shitty

    amaze that shit looks gnarly as fuck yo

    and rsakens your shit looks legit as well

    what markers do you guys use? i need to get some good markers i was trying to use deco and elmers paint markers to sketch throws but DAMN big mistake you cant get fine points and it looks shitty!
     
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  14. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    u neeed to do simple blocked letters know u stucture
     
  15. Xyk

    Xyk Senior Member

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    Fasho - It looks like you know what your doing, but you didnt do ti very well. Do some simples to show that you can do them well, or people will keep telling you to do them.

    Rank - Tags is hots. Very smex. Looks liek 3 lines to me thoh, not all one haha,

    A Maze - Teh charac looks dope as well, but mayeb extend the teeth all the way around the jaw and see what happens.

    And now... a VERY SIMPLE sticker design i made using microsoft paint! Now i can just print these right onto sticker paper, and go crazy indoors!

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  16. Hyperactiveness?

    Hyperactiveness? Senior Member

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    Rank-oner!
    Thats some good shit man im loving the shading so word. Only thing though is the A seems a bit small but it's probably just the angle of the shot so dont sweat it. As for the handstyle you got something really sweet going for ya. Btw can you PM me or something about the city you write in?
    "Fasho" T|y|B
    Your 3Ding is looking mighty solid. Clean it up a bit more and that'll be awesome. 3Ds are a pain in the ass for me personally but im currently working on it.
    Xyk
    Thats some pretty hot shit man you can go big and even use this sticker design to bust out some pain on the wall with rollers!

    As for me I need some more markers... im so dead with colors lol
    Epur is the name. Dont hold back on crits!
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  17. mxman

    mxman Senior Member

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    leno chins rock
     
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  18. mxman

    mxman Senior Member

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    Fasho - i really like your letters, i'd like to see it with fatter letters and without angles!
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    clear cd (no other thread to put it) - paintmarker/coloredpencil.....my k is messed up
     
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  19. "Fasho" T|y|B

    "Fasho" T|y|B Senior Member

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    hyper - on the first one i think you need to seperate the u from the r a little more and the second one is sex yo maybe make the glare a little brighter other than that its fire and the third one keep all the letters proportionate your R is bigger than the rest and the E is smaller but yeah if i saw that third one on a wall id have to stop and admire that shit

    xyk that shit looks dope
    paint it! would look good as a BIGASS hitup under an overpass you know what i mean?

    mxman what paint markers you use your shit looks all clean my markers streak like a bitch!
     
  20. Xyk

    Xyk Senior Member

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    Bumpity before bed.

    Hyperactiveness - It looks like you sorta know what youre doing, but not really. Maybe go back to basics for a while more?

    MXMAN - Ya lol. That K is screwed up. The rest is hot as hell thoh. Liking the bubblegum color scheme