maybe it would look better if you closed off the line that connects the left leg to the right leg, to make the right one seem more seperated? i dunno if that made sense?
i like that c dont know if its a bite or not according to rots but i like it heres some more bullshhhiittt [Broken External Image]:http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/6388/cimg0164mb9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9862/cimg0165gz4.jpg
over: i like the simple style, nice bars. spark: looks alright just work on ur letter sizing kemps: work on your structure before going too crazy dusc: gotta work on ur letter thicknesses(try bars first) czar: lookin good but clean up some of those extensions(can tell its a c, but it could pass for an "s" or even a "G") brash: work on letter thickness revid: looking better, keep it up. sorry bout the weak ass pic quality. Some quick pen piece i did today. crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3757/saterpenqn5.jpg
just a few throws revid-the right leg of the r were the end goes up looks tarded other than that its dope edit*the handstyle would look better if it was all conected instead of the g doing that one blah blah blah who cares haha czar-i dont like the extentions they looks kinda.... :-/ the sate-i cant really make out whats inbetween the s and e(?) to many random extentions and shit and the pics pretty small too
here fixed: i like it so whatev [Broken External Image]:http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9016/cimg0169aw8.jpg and this thing hahaha oh my the most simple of simple kinda dig it [Broken External Image]:http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/482/cimg0168eb2.jpg
its old,i dont think i posted it on here(i did how ever post it on pg )the shadow/cracks look like shit ah well im bored and feel like posting haha edit*HAHA I HATE THIS SLOW AS INTERNET BY THE TIME I POSST THERE ARE TWO MORE ABOVE MINE HAHA rev-i like the first one sep the e :-/ and i dont even wanna comment on the second one haha
I did graffiti awhile back but i stopped writing and im trying to get back into it and well i basicly suck so im staying in this thread till i get better... [Broken External Image]:http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080218_3.jpg Crits would be seriously appriciated
[Broken External Image]:http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080216_4.jpg first time sketchin that one so yea the lines are a bit shakey and some letters are crooked give me a break lol crits?
revid-like the first one, second one doesn't really look like anythin smooth nuts-don't know what to say, looks good soboe-liked that letter, shoulda added a couple more